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Oakland Arts Review (OAR) is an annual journal published through Oakland University in Rochester Hills, Michigan. OAR is dedicated to the publication and advancement of literature written by undergraduate students from across the United States and around the world. We publish fiction, poetry, essays, comics, and screenplay excerpts, as well as artwork. Because we believe that undergraduate students have much to contribute to the literary world, it is our mission to provide a platform for this generationâ€™s emerging writers and, in so doing, create a journal that is of both high artistic quality and great literary significance to readers from all backgrounds.

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Oakland Arts Review Volume 2 Winter 2017 Cover Piece Marigrace Francis Logo Design Natalie Williams Oakland Arts Review (OAR) is an annual international undergraduate literar y journal published by Oakland University OAR Depar tment of English 2200 Nor th Squirrel Road O’Dowd Hall Rochester, MI 48309 Submit to: https://oar.submittable.com/submit OAR is published by Cushing–Malloy, Inc., Ann Arbor, Michigan Cover Design Jeffrey Chapman Interior Layout Design Kevin T. Ferguson

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Staff Samantha Boggs Jessica Born Sasha Brooks Amber Bush Brittney Diesbourg Angelica Dimson Danielle Donakowski Katherine Eckenwiler William Georges Melissa Klein Megan Luttinen Amanda Matkowski Caressa McCready Leah Meldrum Erin Norton-Lannen Abigail Patrick Levi Raab Paige Rowland Lindsey Strom Jessica Trudeau Mary Wilson Faculty Advisers Dr. Jeffrey Chapman Dr. Alison Powell

CONTENTS HAJJA RAZIA SHARIF SHEIKH PRIZES IN POETRY AND NONFICTION ECHOES 53 Ameena Chaudhry TO A PEACH TREE 55 Sena Cebeci CAREFUL 58 Zaynab Zaman CITIZEN 60 Dalia Elhassan AL-KAFIRAH (THE UNBELIEVER) 67 Mahalia Sobhani

FICTION ALEWIFE 13 Haley Ingram BURNING NET 37 Sarah Cash AMERICAN MESSIAH 85 Sebastian Romero A VISIT TO BISABUELA 99 Estefania Acquaviva

NONFICTION HER NAME MEANT WISDOM 33 Lydia Yousief PRANAYAMA 76 Abigail Newhouse WHAT I REMEMBER 80 Julieanna Herriven DRAGONFLIES 108 Michelle Norsworthy DER ERLKÖNIG 118 Ryan Deysher

POETRY MAKING BIRDS IN THE LITTLE BUILDING 28 Emily Hillebrand LEMON TREE 29 Ezgi Nur Güvem POST-CONCERT 30 Ezgi Nur Güvem ON THE BOSPHORUS 31 Ezgi Nur Güvem OUTDOOR FUNERAL 32 Macy French YOU WILL BE GIVEN 44 Ameya Calvocoressi SPILLED MINT 46 Ameya Calvocoressi

CLADDAGH 47 Mikayla Meyers SWALLOW THE FIRE 48 Mikayla Meyers LETTER TO GEORGIA Oâ€™KEEFE 49 Mikayla Meyers ON THE REDLINE 51 Michael McGillicuddy HER MIDDLE NAME IS JOY, AND IT SHOULD BE 74 Brandon Hansen MULTISTORY 82 CJ West JUICING BRUISES 83 CJ West AT OUR FUTURE HOME IN BATH 84 Gabrielle Tribou - - SAMMA-VAYAMA 89 Rachel Ann Girty ODE TO DRIVING 120 MPH 90 Aaron Leininger ON THE FORMATION OF VEGETABLE MOULD 92 THROUGH THE ACTION OF WORMS, WITH OBSERVATIONS ON THEIR HABITS Benjamin Kuzava VIGNETTE: DECEMBER IN MI 94 Benjamin Kuzava PRAYERS TO SPIDERS 95 Zane Johnson THE LITTLE PRINCE 112 Alice Pow

ODE TO YOU 113 Alice Pow GOOD WOMEN 114 Danielle Clark TO THE RED SKY 116 Emilee Kinney ALL WAS SWEPT AWAY 117 Emilee Kinney

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AS THE CROW FLIES 124 illustrated by Melanie Gillman INTERVIEW WITH MELANIE GILLMAN 129 Paige Rowland

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ALEWIFE Haley Ingram Bowling Green State University

I met Ama Palermo when I was twenty-six and on the last year of my PhD. Back then, I perpetually smelled like dead fish, old water, and sunscreen, which is weird because I never killed any fish, changed my waders every two months, and burned regardless of quality or quantity of sunscreen and stopped applying it. Ama was a little woman from the Yucatán peninsula, dark-haired and gentle, but tough and wiry. Her arms were corded with muscle and she had a strength in her hands like no woman—and very few men—I’d met before or since. “I’m Ama,” she said, in a light, clear voice. “I’m your new post doc.” The day she came to Black Bass Research Outpost Twenty-Two, the lake was still flecked with ice floes and the wind that came down off the Upper Peninsula still had a vicious bite. I remember thinking it unseasonable for mid-April, but after eight years of work on the Great Lakes I’d grown used to the cold. Ama, though she put on a brave face, was not. The first month she was with us, she walked around in an alpaca fleece hoodie with a blanket wrapped around her shoulders. We called her “Superama,” which she took to good-naturedly, and asked her when she’d move the earth closer to the sun so we could warm up and actually get research going. “Soon,” she’d say, and smile. By May we were all antsy and eager to get out on the water. There were five of us at the station. Me, a PhD student in Fisheries Science, specializing in migratory patterns; Paul and Antoine, Masters students in Applied Aquatic Ecology; Suzy, who angled, ran our equipment, and broke and mended our ancient computer on a weekly cycle—and now Ama. Technically, as a post doc, she should have been in charge of the station, but as we found out one night at Crappie’s, she was a folklorist, not a scientist. We freaked out. Outpost Twenty-Two wasn’t a dangerous research

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station, not like some of the Alaskan salmon monitoring stations or the harpy eagle outposts in the Amazon, but it wasn’t all that safe either. We’d spend days out on the lake. Heatstroke and sun poisoning were always at the back of everybody’s minds. And if Ama fell off a boat and drowned, or stepped on a rusty fish hook and got tetanus, or was struck by one of the million other little tragedies that could befall someone out here, one of us would be responsible. In 2009, when I met Ama, the economy was in the shitter. Nobody had any money to keep their houses or feed their kids, let alone fund a pack of twenty-somethings out on Lake Michigan. Everyone who was at Outpost Twenty-Two had fought tooth and nail to get the money to be there, and none of us had that much to spare. “Shit,” Paul announced, after Ama had told us that she was a folklorist with next to no field experience. “I like you and all, but I sure as hell ain’t paying your hospital bills.” The rest of us loudly and emphatically agreed. Ama had only laughed. “I have my own grant,” she assured us. “You don’t have to worry.” And to prove her point, she bought the next round of beers. That calmed us all down. If Ama had a grant, none of us had to worry about her. It wasn’t ideal, having someone hanging around the research station who wouldn’t be helping with anything we were doing, but she’d be an annoyance at worst, not a financial liability. “How does a Doctor of Philosophy in Folklore end up hanging around with a bunch of lake people?” I asked. Ama grinned, flashing teeth and a deep dimple. “Budget cuts,” she said. “My advisor thought it would be more, eh, costeffective if I bunked with you instead of at a hotel or drove from Northern Michigan. I’m sorry, I thought you knew.” We all shrugged. I hadn’t heard from my advisor in a month and a half. Paul and his advisor, who hated any piece of technology younger than 1980, had been known to communicate through smoke signals. We all got it. We finished our drinks, teased Ama about her dimples and Antoine about his inability to hold pisswater beer, and headed back out into the cold. The next few weeks passed quickly. We could feel the wind warming up and the lake start to thaw, so we spent all of our time checking lines and kicking the rust off our equipment. Ama fit in well enough; she drank like a scientist, swore like a scientist, and cursed out her subjects and data sets like a scientist, so we accepted her like a scientist. Ama split her time

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between helping us and running around the UP collecting folk stories. “I’m writing an anthology,” she said, “comparing regional folktales from the Yucatán up through here. I’m calling it Twenty-Eight Degrees.” “Why?” Ama laughed at me again. “You’re a smart man. You’ve got Google. Figure it out, ese.” Our summer season started, as it always did, with death. The second weekend in May, we all woke up to the smell of rotting fish. The waves had brought in hundreds of them. Big steelhead and fat bass and massive alewives, carp the size of dogs, tiny minnows and darters, crappie by the dozen. All of them flashed and shone in the sun. Their scales stuck to my feet like sand. The shoreline was thick with them as far as the eye could see in either direction. Seagulls had come by the thousands and bald eagles flew low to pick the freshest carcasses out of the waves. Suzy’s dog, Bruno, went mad with excitement and had to be locked inside. If we let him out he’d gorge himself silly on dead fish. We’d usually let the die-off sit for a few days, but this year the smell was unbearable. We ended up shoveling the fish into shallow, sandy graves, bandanas wrapped around our faces and candles always burning on the station deck to keep the smell out. Ama, who’d never seen a die-off, was horrified. “What, they don’t get this down in the Yucatán?” Paul drawled. He was a good ol’ boy from Louisiana and pronounced it yuck-ah-ton. “No,” said Ama, looking troubled. Her face was wet with sympathy. “Why does this happen?” I shrugged. “There’s not enough oxygen in the water in the wintertime,” I said. “And the surface waters are too cold. Fish either have to starve for oxygen or risk freezing to death. When enough of them do die, there’s more oxygen to go around for the rest.” “That’s horrible!” I shrugged again with one shoulder, awkwardly. It was just something that happened. The sun came up and the winters were cold and every season at Black Bass started with a die-off. I was more concerned with the migrations of the alewives. Alewives, Alosa psuedoherengus, are strange fish. They’re anadromous, meaning that they spend most of their adult lives in the sea, only returning to fresh water when it’s time for them to breed. They have an amazing ability to find the exact stream, pond, or lake that they were born in, too. And some of them have found that they liked freshwater so

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much that they stayed; in the 1960s alewives colonized Lake Huron and Lake Michigan and stayed there year round, displacing some native fish but ultimately not disturbing the ecosystem too much. They’re good sport fish, alewives. Strong fighters. They’re not terribly big fish, only growing to about a foot or so, and by the time all of the fisheries and environmentalists caught on it was too late to do anything about them. The lakes got used to them. And then, two or three years ago, they started disappearing. Not just dying out, which happens, but vanishing completely. Alewives spawn in the summer, and last year, not a single fish was caught on its way from the sea to the lakes and streams where it would spawn. At first, I thought it was because no one had been looking. But I’d asked around and nobody—not the EPA, not CEPA, not the Division of Natural Resources, not any of the hundreds of research stations and university labs set up along the Great Lakes—had caught one alewife in the normal spawning season of March through August. In the autumn, though, thousands of ‘wives were caught heading to the ocean. Not returning from breeding, not making their seasonal migration back and forth, just leaving. They went out to sea, disappeared into the deep, and stayed there. The migration, it seemed, was final. Now, bass were my favorite kind of fish. I loved them, and had loved them since I was a kid and my dad taught me how to fish with a string, a stick, and a hook fashioned out of the side of a Campbell’s soup can. But the Lakes depended on the ‘wives. They were important predators for other fish, important prey for the birds, and important sport fish for the tourists. So the National Science Foundation gave my advisor three hundred thousand dollars in ‘07, before the recession, and my advisor turned me loose on Lake Michigan. I followed alewives all summer long, trying to figure out where they were going and why. We all had theories. I thought that chemical changes brought on by agriculture and industrial dumping in the lake made it too hard for the alewives to regulate salt; they’re not freshwater fish, so keeping their internal salt balance constant without the help of salty water was hard for them. Antoine thought it was a new predator, some trout or bass species that had finally figured out that alewives were good to eat. Suzy didn’t care. Paul thought it was the next step in a cycle no one had ever had the technology to observe before. And Ama, once I explained to her what I was doing and why, thought it

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sounded like a fairytale. “Oh,” she said, “it sounds like an éxodo. A journey to the Promised Land. La tierra de leche y miel.” I didn’t speak Spanish, and I didn’t particularly care for fairytales in my scientific studies, but Ama wanted to go with me while I followed the alewives from Lake Michigan out to the Atlantic Ocean, and I had a hundred thousand dollars left, so I put up with her stories and let her come. “I promise I won’t get in your way,” she said, grinning. “I have these to sort through.” And she waved a stack of papers, both typed and handwritten, as thick as my arms. While Suzy, Paul, and I had been cleaning our gear and getting everything ready for the summer season, Ama had been traveling. She went all over the UP and the coast of Lake Michigan, meeting with anyone who could tell her a story. She’d been up to the L’Anse Reservation and Sault Ste. Marie to record the stories of the Soo Tribe, down to the copper and tin mines to pry old miner’s legends and ghost stories up from the earth, to every small town and village that dotted the coastline, chasing Dogman and bush monkeys and the local Bigfoot knockoff that terrorized a bunch of drunk college kids on Spring Break. Ama had told us about all of these little stories over beer and homemade mac and cheese, picking bits of fried skin off the side of some fresh-caught bass. Her passion lit her up. Paul and Antoine thought that Ama was weird for caring about a bunch of local legends as much as she did, and maybe she was, but Ama listened whenever we started ranting about migratory patterns and the new disease that was decimating bass fry, so I gave her a pass. I liked the way her hands moved when she talked. “So?” Ama said, looking me up and down. She was too stubborn for her own good, sometimes. I’d watched Ama chase down stories to the point of exhaustion, needle Antoine past the point of a joke. She got into a fight with a cashier at Meijer once because she refused to let him get away with calling her mamacita. Ama wouldn’t back down for anything. “So,” I said. “Can I come?” “You know how to swim?” Ama rolled her eyes. “Not really,” she said, “but that’s why we have life jackets, no?” I sighed. “If you drown, I’m not writing your anthology,” I warned. “I

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can’t write for shit. Drives my advisor crazy.” First, we went out on the lake and caught fish by the hundreds. Suzy came, which meant that there were always fish in the boat, and Ama held them down, corded forearms bulging, while I clipped GPS tags to their fins and threw them back. Suzy firmly believed that you couldn’t fish without being at least a little drunk, so we had a cooler full of beer and a portable fryer full of perch. May passed in a haze of Oculto, some kind of Tex-Mex beer Ama loved, and conversation. We were always covered in bits of scales. Ama kept all of the scales she found stuck in her hair and to the heels of her hands. She dried them out and punched fine, delicate holes in them, strung them together and made necklaces, bracelets, and garlands out of fishing line that she draped all around the station and the boat like iridescent scallops of chain mail. “You know the story of Salmon Boy?” She asked me one day, fashioning another string of scales. “No,” I said. “It’s a Haida legend,” Ama said. “I spent three months in Alaska as an undergrad recording Haida folklore.” “Who’s Salmon Boy?” Ama flicked a scale at me. “An arrogant chulo. He thought he was better than the fish that fed him.” “Can I go on record and say that I don’t like where this is going?” Ama smacked my arm and continued. “The boy was out fishing one day and he fell into a river where the salmon ran. The salmon, who knew the boy was disrespectful and arrogant, drowned him and carried him off to their land.” “How?” I said, mostly to see what Ama would do. “Fish don’t have hands.” Ama didn’t laugh. “The salmon were in the river to breed,” she said. “And because the Salmon People were kind, they left their physical bodies every year behind for the birds and the bears and the people who needed them to survive and returned to their world as spirits. “They took the arrogant boy with them, leaving his body bloated and drowned in the river where it fed the birds and fed the bears, shed their own scales, and brought him to their land. And when he got there, the boy was amazed, because the salmon in their own land were just like people. They lived in huts beside the sea and loved each other and cared for their children, and the boy learned that he had been cruel

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and disrespectful to a people as complex as his own. The boy begged forgiveness, and stayed with the salmon for many years. “One season, the salmon sent the boy back to his tribe, where he lived for many more years healing and teaching the children of his village to respect all of the birds of the air and the beasts of the land and the fish of the sea.” “I do know this story,” I said, surprised. Ama looked me up and down. “How does it end, then?” She said. I couldn’t tell if she was mad at me for interrupting or pleased that I knew the story. “The Salmon Boy died.” I took another drink to avoid the look in her eyes. “And when he did, his village put his body in the river where he spun around four times and sank.” “Very good,” Ama said, and she finally smiled. “So, what? Am I supposed to be Salmon Boy?” Ama cracked up. “No,” she said, giggling. “You’re a white boy, ese. That’s cultural appropriation. It’s just a story.” “What’s a fairytale scholar doing on a fishing boat in Michigan?” Suzy asked once I’d stopped blushing and Ama stopped laughing. Suzy knocked back another Oculto and watched her line swinging out over the water. We’d pulled the nets in for the day. I had thirty-three GPS tags left. We’d be ready to head back to Black Bass tomorrow. “There’s more stories here than back home,” said Ama, half-asleep. The sky was clear and open, a riot of distant light. I could see the Milky Way feathering out above us. I remember seeing the stars swim like millions of little fish, dancing in the darkness. “Seriously?” “Seriously,” said Ama. “The stories here—they’re new. There’s still magia in them. You don’t have people dissecting them all the time, reducing them down to bones.” The way she said it made me think of fish carcasses washed up on shore. Picked clean and gleaming. Nothing left for anyone. “I didn’t think stories could get like that,” I said. “They’re just words. How can they get—old? Dried out?” Ama laughed. “What was the last book you read?” “Uh.” As a general rule, PhD students didn’t read for pleasure. We read academic journals and Nature publications, but we didn’t do anything else but cry, binge Breaking Bad on Netflix, and bleed for our doctorates. “The Hunger Games, probably?” “Ah,” said Ama. “La diosa Artemis. How did reading it make you feel?”

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I frowned and shot a glance at Suzy. There was a fish on her line, bucking and heaving beneath the water, and she’d lost interest. “It didn’t really,” I said. “It was fun, I guess? It was just a story.” “A story you’ve heard before.” And when she said it I knew she was right. It was an old story, dressed up like a new one. A lone hero, a girl in the woods, a boy, a villain, a choice. Put together a little differently, said Ama, so it still had a bit of the magic of newer stories—and she said that with purpose, magia, like she believed that magic was really real—still had the power to captivate and inspire, but it was weaker, she said, and getting weaker still. “The stories are changing,” said Ama. “They’re moving. Going somewhere else.” “La tierra del leche y miel?” I guessed, and grinned. Ama had lost me. I didn’t get it. Stories were stories. You took them with you in your Kindle or your iPad, on your bookshelf, in your DVD player. They didn’t go anywhere, not really. Not like my fish, whose movements could be quantified, anyway, whose patterns could be tracked, observed, and recorded. I was not a philosophical person; I liked numbers. I liked data. I liked fish in my hands. Ama seemed to sense that she’d lost me, and only smiled. “It’s all right,” she said. “Not even my advisor understood, not really. I only got the funding for this post doc because I convinced your government that preserving some of these stories could buy them a lot of goodwill.” So you lied, I thought, because no anthology was going to fix any of the problems that plagued the people up here; the poverty, the dying mine towns, the lakes that were losing their fish, not like some hard scientific data and an EPA grant would, but I just finished my beer and said nothing. By June, the fish were moving, and Ama and I were ready to follow. We piled all of our gear and three weeks’ worth of food into a battered yacht my advisor conned off his old advisor in a poker game, and started after the alewives. There were a hundred ways for our fish to get to the ocean. The Great Lakes are connected to the Atlantic by a spider web of rivers and streams, and the fish could have lost us down a narrow canal or a whitewater river, but they didn’t. We followed them around the broad edge of Michigan into Lake Huron, down to Erie, back up to Ontario, and spent three days in Toronto sleeping in real beds while the fish milled about in the lake. “Maybe they’re settling here,” I said, looking out at the water. The sun had set over the western basin, turning both sky and water a deep,

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bruised blue. A few strips of moonlight shivered on the waves. If the entire population of alewives was moving to Lake Ontario, there would be a problem—there are hundreds of thousands of ‘wives in Lake Michigan and Lake Superior alone. If they were coming to Ontario, there would be trouble. They would decimate the prey populations and send the fisheries, which depended on Ontario to stock their rivers, into a collapse. It would be an economic disaster. Ama shrugged, and went to walk on the beach while I made a few panicked, slightly drunken phone calls to people I knew who took care of Lake Ontario. I kept one eye on Ama—the paperwork would be hell if she died on my watch—and listened to my friend Georgia, who worked for the Canadian EPA and knew more about fish than anyone but Suzy. “They’re not staying here, not permanently,” Georgia told me. “Alewives don’t like our lake much. It’s too shallow for them. We’ve been getting huge influxes recently, but they’re not staying. They’ll head up the St. Lawrence as soon as the flooding goes down. Massive rainstorm last week,” she added, and then hung up on me to go corral some interns. I found Ama down the beach, sitting on the rocky shore, and she had her palms cupped together and water running slowly out between her fingers. I frowned. “What’cha got there?” I asked, and flopped down beside her. The lake was dark and quiet, but I knew that below the surface thousands of fish were darting around each other, dancing, twisting, seething, feeding, being fed on. It made it hard to sleep, thinking about the alewives and their journey. I felt like I had to stay awake with them. I had to watch out for predators. I too had to make it to the ocean. Ama showed me. In her cupped palms was a fish, a tiny silver thing no longer than my little finger. It swam around in Ama’s cupped hands, bumping against her fingers, completely oblivious to the fact that its world was draining out from underneath it. “What kind of fish is it?” She asked. I shrugged. “It’s hard to tell when they’re that small,” I said. It looked like a juvenile alewife, but I’d never seen one that small before. Ama put it back in the shallows, where it hung suspended for a moment and then disappeared, its tiny, perfect scales flashing in the moon before it vanished into the water. “Why do you think your fish are leaving?” “I don’t know,” I said, because we’d taken chemical readings all the way from Black Bass to Toronto, salt readings and a battery of ELISA tests for

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nitrogen levels and phosphorous levels, coliform tests for E. coli, measures of algal levels and cyanobacteria and manmade chemicals like atrazine, DDT, PCBs and HCBs. Nothing in the lakes was different than it had been for the last few decades. My theory was shot. I had no idea why the fish were moving. I had passed the point of panic and moved into gray despair. I was defending my thesis in two months. Worse, if I couldn’t find out why the alewives were leaving, the whole economy of the Great Lakes could collapse. We depended on the fish for so much. Yeah, there wasn’t a huge market for alewives, but tourism was huge and the entire food web of Lake Michigan depended on them. If the ‘wives disappeared, the zooplankton would boom. All of the zebra mussels and crustaceans that were overtaking the Great Lakes would run wild. The bass and walleye and whitefish wouldn’t have anything to eat. The die-offs would get worse. But I had just two months left, and I was starting to feel like this trip was just me spending NSF’s money while taking a nice vacation through the Great Lakes. There was nothing I could do. What kind of data analysis could I get done in two months? What kind of conclusions could I draw? None of the chemical readings had panned out. I had spent three years as an undergrad studying fish in Lake Michigan. Two years as a Masters student. Four as a PhD. My thesis was called, A Comprehensive Analysis of the Migratory Patterns of Economically Critical Great Lakes Fish. And I couldn’t figure out why the alewives were migrating. The weight of my failure left me fuzzy and apathetic. “Why do you think my fish are leaving?” “Why do people leave?” “What?” Ama smiled. “Why do people leave? Human beings have been moving from one place to another for as long as we’ve had legs. You know of Palenque?” I watched the waves—smaller here than they could get out on Lake Michigan, and warmer, and full of flashing silver fish—and shook my head. “Palenque was a Mayan city,” Ama said, waving a hand. “A beautiful place, with good fields, plenty of water, places to raise livestock and children. Una tierra de leche y miel. But it was abandoned. Its people moved away. The forest took it back, and it was a long time before we found Palenque again.” “Why was it abandoned?” I asked, curious. I was a shitty student in any

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subject that didn’t involve fish, but Ama had a storyteller’s voice and a storyteller’s rhythm, and listening to her felt different than sitting down and taking notes. Ama waved a hand. She had graceful fingers. I had never really noticed before. “No sé,” she said. “We haven’t found a reason. The people just... left. Moved. Because they wanted to. Because there was something better somewhere else. Because they didn’t want to be where they were anymore.” “Fish aren’t people,” I argued. “They’re fish. They don’t think like we do. They don’t want things like we do. They go where they go based on instinct, that’s all.” Ama raised an eyebrow, and her dark eyes shone silver in the moonlight. “If you say,” she said, and lay back against the beach, arms thrown out, hair fanned behind her. “Though if I was telling the story, I’d tell it differently.” I snorted, irritated, and pulled my knees to my chest. It was cold for late June, but the wind wasn’t too biting and I wanted to stay by the water anyway. I didn’t ask Ama for her story and she didn’t offer it, not then. I think I hurt her feelings. She’d always been friendly and helpful and I’d turned her down out of hand, but I could be as stubborn as she was. I didn’t want to hear her stories. We sat by the water and Ama scribbled in her notebook by flashlight, jabbing her pen against the pages, muttering under her breath in Spanish, and I watched the waves. We went back to our hotel angry. We didn’t say goodnight. In the morning, we restocked and headed out again, following the little glowing dots on my computer screen. We’d tagged four hundred alewives back in Michigan. About three hundred tags were still active, and most of them were clustered together, heading for the mouth of the St. Lawrence River. We followed. The river was calm and the fish moved steadily, stopping every few days to spend sometimes as much as a week in one place. They didn’t seem to be in any rush to get anywhere. We caught a few, recorded their weights and lengths, and threw them back. They hadn’t lost much weight despite the hundreds of miles they’d gone. They were, for all intents and purposes, strong and healthy. They fought our lines like tigers. Ama and I didn’t talk about stories anymore. There was plenty else to talk about—the weather, her hometown, my hometown, what we wanted to do with our lives—and neither of us wanted to make the other feel uncomfortable, so we kept our talk civil and shallow. I spent a lot of time

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tinkering with my thesis. Ama read and wrote. I didn’t find any answers for the alewives’ migration, but I started watching birds. They weren’t so different from fish. Lying on my back on the deck of the boat I could watch them swim through the sky, winging their way from horizon to horizon. Watching them did something to ease the gray despair in my guts. I started keeping track of them, scribbling down the sizes of their flocks and the species I saw, the patterns of their movements. It felt good to have some data again. I had never been this far north. Michigan was my home but even the UP’s miles of dense, dark woods and acres of clear water had nothing compared to these forests. This far north the woods were all boreal shield, all spruce and towering northern pine. The water was cold and clear, the St. Lawrence an inexorable force pulling us towards the sea. The stars were like nothing I’ve ever seen. Ama started telling me stories again, describing the gods and goddesses who made up the heavens, the Greek tragedies, the Algonquin monsters and the Malecite heroes, great bears and fish that shed their scales and walked on the earth before vanishing back into the river or the sea. “Why do you want to write this book?” I asked. “Is it really that important to you?” “Why do you want to find out where the alewives are going?” Ama shot back. Her eyes flashed with a challenge. I snorted. “I want to get a job,” I said. “And that’s it?” “That’s it,” I said, and left it at that. Ama didn’t push, but she didn’t tell me why she wanted to write her anthology either. The fish, as fish do, kept swimming. Finally, in August, we were nearing the delta of the river, where freshwater met salt, and I could taste the ocean in the air and hear the gulls crying, and Ama said, “Look.” I didn’t see anything, at first. Just waves and wind and the sea opening up like a reflection of the sky, and then our boat began to hit something. Hundreds of somethings. The boat twitched back and forth and we could feel each impact in the soles of our feet. “Not out,” said Ama, “down,” and I looked down into the water. We were surrounded by fish. There must have been thousands of them, all swimming around the boat like we were one of them, bumping into it with their heads and bodies, jostling their neighbors, and flashing their

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fins and tails. At first I thought I must be crazy, because the fish swimming all around us were too big to be alewives; they were all longer than my arm, fat and sleek, but their silver scales were a dead giveaway, and the longer I looked the more of them I saw. There were the massive ones, great giants that must have come from the very depths of Lake Michigan and were swimming, half-blind, only with the help of their neighbors, and smaller ones, and impossibly tiny ones that didn’t even have to swim, just had to stay afloat while the force of the rest of the migration carried them on. I could hear them, too. Their fins stirred the water like waves on the shore and they thudded and thumped against the sides of our boat, splashed up to the surface and vanished back down into the depths of the river. The river itself was quiet, deep and slow-moving as it was, but the ocean sang. We drifted out to sea with the alewives, and all around us was a river of living silver. Their scales shone in the sun. They took us out into the open ocean and circled us, Ama laughing and me standing there slack-jawed and awestruck, a great, slow turn of fish spiraling from the surface to the sea. I leaned down as far as I could, clinging to the railing with one hand and reaching down with the other, my fingertips just barely brushing the water. The fish didn’t seem to care and they were cool and wet against my fingers, dozens of them bumping against my hands as they passed. “You’re going to fall,” Ama said, grabbing the back of my shirt. “Who’s at risk of drowning now, Sam?” “I’m not gonna fall,” I said, but pulled my hand back. The alewives spun around us again in their slow spiral, and then they flashed their fins at us and were gone. “Are you writing this down?” Ama said, still laughing. “Because this seems scientifically relevant, no?” I jotted down my observations, but I didn’t have the words to say what I knew, what I’d seen watching those fish. We weren’t ever going to see alewives in the Great Lakes again. I don’t know how I knew that but I knew. I knew. That night, with the stars above us and the fish below, I asked Ama to tell me a story. She laughed. “What kind of story?” she asked. “Tell me about the fish,” I said. Ama looked at me with her dark eyes, her strong shoulders held straight, and said, “Había una vez, there was a scientist who did not believe

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in magic. The rest of the story you’ve got to tell for yourself,” she said. “That way, it will be a new story. A new fairytale.” “I’m not a storyteller,” I said. I wasn’t angry or irritated with Ama anymore, just tired. Just frustrated. I wanted an answer and she didn’t seem to want to give me one. I wanted it to mean something, this migration, and I didn’t know how to make it work. “I’m not a writer. I’m just a grad student.” Ama shook her head. “Doesn’t matter,” she said. “Anyone can tell a story, even a stubborn graduate student. There are scientists who are great writers.” “Well, I’m not one of them,” I snapped. “I’m good at numbers. Graphs. I ever make you an ANOVA? I can make great ANOVAs. I can catch a fish. But that’s it.” “Why did the people of Palenque leave?” Ama asked, refusing to back down and let me off the hook. She crossed her arms and planted her feet on the wet deck of our boat and waited. “I—what? I don’t know. I’m not an anthropologist.” “I left Mexico because I wanted something different,” Ama said. “I didn’t know what that was, but I wanted something new. So I came here. I’m writing my anthology because I traveled across twenty-eight degrees of the earth and found that everyone had a story to tell me. That’s it. It’s not a long story, but it’s mine, entiendes? Now you tell one.” I opened my mouth, then closed it again. I didn’t know what to say. Where to start. Writing a scientific paper is straightforward. There’s a process. You start with your idea—we wanted to know why the alewives were leaving—and follow it up with how you studied them, what you found, and what you thought it meant. I told Ama this, and she smiled. “Exactly,” she said. “So, once upon a time...” Feeling like an idiot, I said, “Once upon a time, uh. The alewives were leaving Lake Michigan. No one knew why, so we—so I—decided to follow them.” And I went on like that for almost an hour, halting and stumbling, while Ama smiled and nodded and added a detail here and there. I talked about the journey, the different lakes, the long stretch of the St. Lawrence, following blinking lights and the fish moving underneath us. I talked about the wind and the waves, about the great river of alewives, and when I was done Ama tilted her head back and said to the sky, “There. That’s a story I’ve never heard before.”

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My throat hurt. “I don’t know what I’m going to do now,” I told her, because I didn’t. Ama shrugged. “What you’ve always done. You’ll get your PhD and then you’ll move somewhere else and start over. You’ll do something new.” I didn’t know what to say to that, and her certainty scared me, and my brain was still stuck on the image of those alewives, the thousands of them circling us, stirring the water, and then disappearing into the deep. After the migration ended, there was really nothing else to do but say goodbye to Ama and begin the long trip back. I offered Ama a ride, but she fell in love with the folklore of Quebec and wanted to stay. She’d heard my story, after all, and now she was after something new. So I left Ama on the shore of the Atlantic Ocean and sailed away, watching her get smaller and smaller until she was nothing but a speck in the sun, her sunglasses catching the light, before the trees swallowed her up and I lost sight of her. Back in Black Bass, my friends flocked around me and asked me how the trip was, if I found where the fish were going, if I found out why. I told them, and made a few adjustments to my thesis. At the end of August I got up before a board of advisors, opened my PowerPoint, and took a deep breath. I stood in front of a picture of Ama and me, a big alewife held up between us, me sunburnt and tall, Ama with her powerful wrists wrapped around the ‘wife’s tail. We were both laughing. “Whenever you’re ready,” my advisor told me. I smiled. We still had no idea why the alewives left, but I had ideas. Maybe the oceans had more food now, or fewer predators, or the water was warmer. Maybe after generations of freshwater the alewives were ready to go back to drinking salt. Maybe there was something deeper to it, some instinct that alewives had that we didn’t. I was going to find out what had happened to the ‘wives. I wanted an answer. I wanted a story. “Once upon a time,” I said, “there was a fish that lived in Lake Michigan.”

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MAKING BIRDS IN THE LITTLE BUILDING Emily Hillebrand Emerson College

the curve of my lampshade for his back â€“ there, hunched into the light. beak fashioned from the metal handle of the armoire. rip out pages of books for wings, cut into them to make sure he canâ€™t fly. two buttons for eyes. no, two sugar packets. shred those receipts for the plumage in his tail. let him hop around the small space and suckle curdled milk from the fridge, nose at the broken tea bag on my dresser, nestle between the wall and the bedpost and peck at my temples while I try to sleep.

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LEMON TREE Ezgi Nur Güvem Dogus University

It’s hard to wait for you— you turn against the sun, away from me until your store begins to fall. I confess I went for a while. I left you when the rain came, knives across the evening dark October, but the rooms were silent. My mother stood at the window expecting winter, sipping wine. As a girl I’d climb to her hips, afraid of being alone. We all change colors as the seasons change, expand and weaken on the vast, dry land, always waiting for the sun, always waiting to be pondered. The day I planted you I listened to the cars on the Old Yalova Road. There were none when I was a girl, only rumors and prayers, the occasional sparrow landing in the grass where you were not.

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POST-CONCERT Ezgi Nur Güvem Dogus University

The scarlet had darkened, the velvet had been drawn back, the smoke in the lobby, the whispers of critics, silence where Stravinsky had been presumed and flawed. The violinist came first, a crawling in her features, the missed note concluding The Rite of Spring. Then the pianist, abrupt, a blizzard of questions in the way she remembered. The mistakes made them twins – the loss, the maybe, the odd but certain pleasure of having bled. As they drank, taxis roared in the street. A late and fateful applause.

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ON THE BOSPHORUS Ezgi Nur Güvem Dogus University

We held our words inside and rose to the sky instead. Two continents, two shadows, narratives in blue between them we couldn’t recount. A burning in the throat beyond exhalation, a sailboat heaving its anchor at the curve of Eminönü. You noticed the spire of St. Irene’s; I the mosque where we said the funeral prayers for my grandfather. Neither noticed the rain.

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OUTDOOR FUNERAL Macy French Tusculum College

A family of vultures is called a wake and they gather to receive friends. Flies spin above dull feathers as the bird mortician prepares the body for rest. He pecks, at the thigh, at the tail, at the skull. The mourners begin to feast in solemnity, dressed in their Sunday best. Conversation hushed and polite as it goes down the line like a game of telephone, the lull of cars drive past, slow down for a moment. The drivers look straight ahead out of respect. Distant relatives and cousins twice removed together in communion with the dead. The bones of their own picked clean, the flesh satisfied.

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HER NAME MEANT WISDOM Lydia Yousief Vanderbilt University

Her name meant wisdom—like that of the prophets and kings, the imaginary kind. The type of wisdom that floated over humans and among gods, but occasionally, compassion would beseech the gods to disperse it among the broken ones below. And that was just her name. I remember when I went back to see her without my husband, she was surprised but eager to see me. We were cousins, and we remembered walking back from school together, the Israeli military planes flying over us as we drank mango, and all the studying we accomplished as young Coptic girls. She remembers those days, and I remember them too. And then she fell behind in school, I remember, and studying together only made her frustrated, for she had no bright eyes to dangle before men nor a spirit of bliss to disrupt their senses. Thus it was when she had nothing to offer, her heart broke down, cracked until it wept, so that while my door opened to many suitors, hers was closed. But there was one man who would have her; he was twice her age, balding already, but wealthy. Her mom looked him up and down, and said, “He’ll pay the bills for your surgery, and he’ll give you children. God has granted us salvation.” Somehow, she convinced my cousin whose name is wisdom, and wisdom fell in love with a man who bought her life. I left her story there, hearing that Barsoum would come to America for six months of the year on business. I asked her if she missed him, and she would shrug, saying, “I get the whole apartment to myself, don’t I?” ** I remember when I went back to see her without my husband and children, left them in America, and I came to see her second and final daughter get married. She had decayed, and I tried not to portray my agony for her. She wore

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the clothes of a peasant, left her hair uncombed, and her eyes drooped toward the earth. I only smiled then. “I look older, no?” The Arabic jolted me momentarily. “Don’t we all?” We embraced with no tears. “Thank God you’re here again,” she said. ** Then, one morning, she spoke to me, saying: “You know, he used to go to America for six months. He’d cross an ocean to be far from me. Ha! He just gives me money for the medication, food and rent. He leaves me to my own, lets me wander alone all these years, and now he’s back for good. But you’d imagine he’d slow down, acknowledge me. No—he bought a beach house, takes them there, and occasionally he’ll bring me and the girls there to linger in their space. Of course, the women are not there, but the beach house is for them and Barsoum. And he stands before God!” “I know. I know.” “He tells me to look at myself, my face that sags, my body that does not hold after giving life twice. He tells me to watch myself and gives me money to buy myself again. Where did I lose myself, Barsoum? Somewhere between my childhood and our marriage, I lost everything.” “I know.” “And what I want to say to him—“ She holds her tea close to her breasts. “I want to say to him that I miss him, that the beach house women can’t—I had your children, Barsoum.” “I know.” “He lurks in webs of shadows and thinks that he’s happy, so I leave him too. Leave him to his own devices. I have few days left, and I have my daughters and grandchildren. You know why they refused to go to the beach house with us last week? They know, and they hate him. That’s what he bought himself: those who could have loved him the most have deserted him, leaving him with his mirage. What a foolish old man, and I’m locked to him, chained. Curse on my mother for chaining me when she knew well of men and their ways!” “But you keep yourself chained to Barsoum!” “What else is there to keep chained to? We all have to be anchored.” “Anchor to God.” She sipped her tea, perhaps in refusal of my proposal but having no desire to debate her faith. Instead, her face darkened, she shrugged. She had no more to say.

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“I suffer the same, you know. You think my life in America is embroidered with gold, but it’s cladded with metal. I too am stuck—no one believes me. No one understands the tongue that I speak, and those who do cannot comprehend. You know he’s been separated from me for a decade now? He sneaks out at night and eats his desires out on younger women who can’t speak. I know. He stands before God and leads men, but behind the doors, he can’t even love his wife. He loves everyone, except me—even our children, he cherishes! All my siblings have deserted me— chained to him and his mask. I know. “We all suffer from God’s silence, but it is in His divine wisdom, I know, because we’re made of something different—the Egyptian woman is. We were born rulers by God, beaten down by men, and risen up again through our children. It is a cycle, I know, that history manages. We suffer, but they will be better. InshAllah, inshAllah.” ** I remember her dropping me off at the airport to return to my husband and children, and she spoke to me: “You listened to my problems, but you came with your own.” I hugged her back, smelled the sweat of a women who had given up before her will was gone. “Both your girls are married, taken care of; leave him.” ** Her name meant wisdom—the kind that few possess and few desire after possessing it. Wisdom is not a tempting attribute, I suppose, but Eve in the Garden desired it above all else. ** “It’s me. I miss the Mediterranean,” I said. “Ah! Yes, I miss you too, habiti, but why don’t you call me on Magic Jack?” “Okay—give me a minute. Salaam.” I temporarily hung up and went to my yellowing phone book; my children now had a way of adding all this information on their devices, but as for me, I called my cousin by my old system. I dialed the number cautiously. To speak across the sea was pricey. It was like remembrance—that straying across seeming galaxies to pull out the memory of old, and then mingle it with what you wanted to recall: Baba cried (when Fadja left); when Mama smiled (limping up the stairs); when Nasser was little and selling popcorn (because he wanted a way out).

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The number you have dialed is no longer in service. I put the phone down. She wasn’t going to leave Barsoum. ** Her name meant wisdom, but she stood among men without a name or remembrance except in me. (So let’s remember her as the girl with the broken heart who loved a man who could buy her life because that girl had a dream—a dream that was chartered and directed by everyone around her except herself. Let’s remember the girl who loved a man without him loving her back. The girl who was too frustrated to mend herself, who spent a lifetime looking at the man’s oasis, asking (pleading), “What is so beautiful?” And the only answer she got was a silent God’s sigh.)

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BURNING NET Sarah Cash University of Colorado Denver

When Scarlet stepped through the door of Hal’s Garden Shoppe the smell of pesticides assaulted her. There was a wrinkled nose, oversized spectacles and egg-yolk-yellow plaid pants wrapped together with a green apron, mopping up the chemical spill between the posies and the solar powered lights. Hal presumably. The shop was only a few blocks from Scarlet’s house but this was her first visit. “Good morning, Miss. Is there anything I can help you find?” Scarlet stared down at the stripes in the old man’s pants. Red, orange and yellow – overlapping and intersecting. “Well I’m not exactly sure what I need,” she said, “I want to save this willow tree that’s been dying in my backyard.” The man’s blue eyes never left the puddle he was diluting. If it weren’t for all the vibrant colors he was wreathed in, she may have mistaken him for a hospital intern. He had the same numbed look in his eyes as someone who had seen too many emergency rooms on too little sleep. Finally, he looked at her; her ginger hair neatly tucked into a bun, her perfectly manicured nails, her pinstriped slacks carefully chosen to match her new heels. What would her features mean to this creature? As a general rule she felt more comfortable when she was well put together, but under this old man’s intrusive speculation she suddenly felt self-conscious. She shouldn’t have come here straight from work, she should have gone home to change first. One of Eliot’s ratty T-shirts seemed more appropriate to the situation. At least that’s the kind of thing Scarlet assumed people wore when gardening. Maybe Hal thought she was a bored house-wife, or a business woman looking for a new project. Whatever his conclusions he didn’t seem to like them. “Look missy,” he spoke again to the puddle, “A tree isn’t just some Thing. You can’t just sprinkle Miracle-Gro on it and water it once a week. It takes care and attention to bring a dying plant back, especially one as large as a

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willow tree.” “I figured that but…” “Don’t bother. Chop it down. Carve it into a statue. Use it as firewood. Whatever you like. Just put it out of its misery.” The old man was still pushing the water and pesticides around with the mop but now he looked directly into Scarlet’s eyes. She had seen those eyes before. “It’s not your fault,” the eyes said, “It’s not anyone’s fault, but let’s face it, you don’t have what it takes to make this better.” Scarlet felt her skin boil off as she glared at Hal, if this old man even was Hal. “Well if I were dumb enough to do it anyway,” she said, “What would I need?” Scarlet chose to wear one of Eliot’s shirts after all. The blue one with the worn off band logo and the hole under the left arm. She spent four hours digging out the old soil and extricating the roots with the care of a paleontologist, chasing centipedes away and chopping out the infected roots with a small hatchet. How far could the root system possibly go? The upper branches of the willow reached at least twenty feet into the sky. Tall enough to be seen over the burnt sienna roof of her small, single story home. She imagined the wires winding and pushing through heavy clay around subterranean boulders deep within the Earth. Scarlet laid her hand within the crevice of one of the rotting roots and tried to feel the electrical pulse she knew must be there. She knew that the trunk was the center of the tree and that as she got deeper the roots would get smaller. But what if the roots just kept winding down, growing thicker as they went? What if this tree, her willow, was really an arm of the Earth, and the roots were the nervous system connecting this extremity to that center. Entrenched in the deep seated calm of the soil, yet leaping out into the chaos of air and light for a taste of the Sun. She closed her eyes and tried again to feel what she thought must be there, but all she could feel was her own heartbeat pounding from her fingertips. Scarlet tore at the rotten root with her hatchet. If trees really were arms of the Earth, then this willow was a limb long overdue for amputation. The leaf beaded vines must have at one time streamed through the air and along the ground in thick tresses. Now it was an old woman with bald patches where she had ripped out her flowing locks in the sterile light of the hospital waiting room. It’s ashen bark was flaking off like embers trapped by the wind. Scarlet had often stared at its tortured existence while drying dishes, expecting at any

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minute that it might curl in on itself and dry out like a spider. Eliot had wanted the house specifically because of the willow tree. “Scarlet. Baby, you gotta come out here and see this!” she could hear Eliot yell from the backyard. She was investigating the cupboards to see if they could squeeze a dishwasher in somewhere. When she stood she saw him attempting to climb a decrepit old tree. He managed to straddle one of the branches, and when he saw her smiling at him through the kitchen window, he beckoned to her with his forefinger. “Don’t hurt yourself,” she said grabbing hold of his sneaker. “Isn’t it glorious!” “If by glorious you mean train wreck, then yea it’s an inspiration.” “Oh, the old girl just needs some attention. Imagine, we could hang a swing right from this branch. And over there we could build a tree house.” “Are you two expecting?” asked the realtor. “No,” said Scarlet, “Maybe in five years or so.” “Scarlet thinks we’re too young,” said Eliot. A year later Eliot was diagnosed with early-onset ALS and the willow sat alone in the yard, slowly cannibalizing itself and Scarlet stood and watched, rubbing dishes down with freshly laundered rags. She had been staring at this tree for eight years; three diagnoses, seven rides in the ambulance, two oxygen machines, fourteen prescriptions, one casket, and twenty-six months of grief counseling. The morning she visited Hal’s Garden Shoppe, over the sigh of the steam rising out of her lime green mug, the sight of the willow was insurmountable. It was almost mocking her with its survival. If it was flourishing she might have contrived a sense of joy at the sight of it. Joy was not something that she was looking for, or expecting, but she might have seen it there in that willow alive and prospering. But having to look out her window and see it grow weaker and waste away at the speed of paint drying was agonizing, maddening. It would be better if it died. As Scarlet dug into the afternoon she found hope in the virility of the gnarled fingers that clung to the ground, and shame in the desire for the roots to give way, for the entire edifice to bury itself in this grave she had spent the morning digging. When the sun rested slightly to the left of the highest branch, Scarlet discovered herself crouched in a pit with her legs and arms woven around the roots picking bug carcasses out of the folds of wood with the gnarledivory tips of her fingernails. She forced herself to stop, afraid that if she

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allowed herself to continue grooming the tree she might dig deeper and deeper until she lost sight of the sun. Her eyes would grow wide and pale and she would scuttle through caverns on calloused knuckles. Scarlet climbed back into the atmosphere noticing the distinct absence of the stench of moist dirt. The ladder was a relic from earlier days when older, wiser persons owned the house. It was a metal, extendable ladder made primarily of rust and one of the rungs was missing. But Scarlet was not the type of person who could gracefully sit and wait for better circumstances. She fitted the ladder into the pit between the roots and leaned it against the trunk. She picked up the axe and began to climb, hacking at the dead branches as she went. This was different from dismantling the roots. For one thing there was a very definite limit to the top of the tree. There was no illusion that it might go on forever. Nothing to get lost in, only the stark honesty of the frail wood. Sobs chocked out of her in time with the thud of the axe. She couldn’t stop herself, and in fact, this woman careening on the ladder with an axe could not possibly be her. She felt more like a concerned neighbor peaking out through the curtains at the deranged woman chopping at her tree. The idea of someone seeing her like this drove her into hysteria, chop, sob, cackle, chop, sob, cackle. Maybe it was Mrs. Johnson trying to get a good look from behind those hideous pink curtains while she called to her fat husband to take a look at what poor Scarlet Walker was doing. She’d probably send over a plate of fudge. Eventually Scarlet was laughing so hard she had to lower herself back down the ladder and sit. Sat on the pile of wood, stared at that unfortunate life-form, laughed herself into silence. She felt like she had woken from sleepwalking; as though she had found herself in the basement with an apple in one hand and a slipper in the other. “This stuff is terrible,” said Eliot trying to un-stick the fudge from the roof of his mouth. He was sprawled out on the couch with his head on Scarlet’s lap, his walker pushed to the side of the coffee table. They had a wheelchair but he didn’t like to use it unless he had to. Said it made him feel too much like an old man. “It’s all your fault. She saw you trying to make it to the mailbox yesterday on those rickety legs of yours,” said Scarlet with a poke to his stomach. Eliot smiled and pulled her into a kiss. She could taste the fudge on his lips, too much salt and a little bitter. Against her cheeks she felt his hands shake from the exertion and tears spilled through her lashes. He wiped them away one at a time as they flooded out.

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“Just tell me it’s all going to be ok,” said Scarlet. “I can’t,” he said. The store bought soil had a much different fragrance from the dirt that had been fermenting around the roots. There was a slight chemical undertone like a much milder version of the pesticides. But more than that it smelled like something was missing. Death. Death was missing. The earth surrounding the tree roots had contained too much death. Dead insects broken down by now dead fungi all packed tight around a nearly dead tree. There was no hope in that dirt. But this smell exuding from the too clean plastic bag was sterile. Past hope, it was delusional machinery imitating life just enough to make you forget about the death. A breathing tube and IV’s, lights that scratched across a screen and made audible the silent workings of a dying heart. And what good is all the maintenance when it’s not an extension of life but a denial of death? What good does the time do anyone when it’s all spent on pretending it’s not passing? Scarlet bought enough soil to fill the hole twice but she would not sterilize this tree anymore than she would watch it die. To sterilize it would be to pretend that it, that she, had not been battling death these last eight years. It would be disrespectful and shameful. If life could not thrive in the cruel light of death was it really life at all? She spent another hour breaking down some of the roots and branches into tiny indistinguishable pieces. She filled one quarter of her new wheelbarrow with the dismantled wood another quarter with the old dirt, and the last half with the new store bought soil. She did this again and again until the hole was filled. Progress with memory. Scarlet had cut off more of the branches than was probably necessary. The sun was coming down between the gnarled stubs as she surveyed her handiwork. After all the effort she had expended to save this tree she may have just killed it faster. Now it was not only old and disgruntled but beaten too. Had she been trying to save it after all? That’s the way it felt when she saw it through the window that morning and every morning before. But if that was really her goal wouldn’t she have expended more caution? No, she wasn’t trying to save it exactly, she just didn’t want to wait any longer for it to die but she didn’t want to kill it either. She had to do something and it didn’t matter what the result was as long as it was different. ***

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The chicken was cold and Scarlet wasn’t very hungry. She pulled the meat off the carcass with her still-slightly-dirty fingertips and ate mechanically. The refrigerator light started to flicker and Scarlet realized she probably shouldn’t eat standing in front of the open door. But she stood there a little longer and ate a few more strips of finger-pulled chicken. What was she going to do now? The tree was either going to survive or it was going to die. Of course she was going to water it and give it the root treatment the old man suggested. But what was she going to do now? She felt like she was submerged in that strange molasses that filled bad dreams, like she was running and running and getting nowhere. Finally she closed the refrigerator door, found a box of matches in the junk drawer and returned to the tree. Scarlet stood with her back against the trunk, her feet as flat on the lumpy soil as she could manage and the back of her heels pressed against the trunk. She took two even steps and reconsidered. It didn’t matter how far it was from the trunk of the tree, the distance from the drooping branches was what mattered. She repositioned herself so the branches instead of the trunk of the willow was at her back. The leaves tangled in her hair. As she began pacing away Scarlet could feel the tree cling to her with its leafy fingers. Ten paces from the branches to Scarlet’s house, twelve to the rose bush, and fifteen to the fence between her yard and the Johnson’s yard. She placed the matchbox on the ground half-way between the fence and the willow. She paced from the matchbox to every major landmark in her yard, shifting the matches a foot this way, two inches that way. Pacing and shifting, pacing and shifting until she was finally satisfied that the matches were as far from everything as was possible. She exchanged the matchbox for a scratch in the ground. Scarlet lugged the remaining bags of soil and the death dirt to the center of her yard. All of it poured from the bags and wheelbarrow onto her neatly kept lawn. She stomped and smashed and molded until a perfectly rounded bowl of dirt sat before her. Inside she piled all the excess branches and roots and crumpled old newspapers in between. “This will get Mrs. Johnson going,” Scarlet thought as she struck a match, but instead of igniting it snapped. “Fuck.” When was the last time she lit a match? Eliot was the only one who ever grilled food so she’d never needed to. After five more matches she finally ignited the newspaper. Tiny flames ate through the paper too quickly and Scarlet worried it would all be consumed before having any effect on the wood. What else could she burn?

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At the back of her closet, was a white, cardboard, filing box full to the brim with Eliot’s old comic books. For a long time the box had sat there gathering dust, but after Eliot got sick, after he had to stop working, after his world was confined to the 1600 square feet of their home Eliot spent hours at a time rustling through those comics. And after his fingers could no longer pinch and separate the glossy pages Scarlet did it for him. Scarlet must have been through them a hundred times but she never read a single one. All she saw was the frenzy of colors flickering under her fingertips. A work colleague offered to buy them from her a few months ago. Apparently, a few of them were worth some money. It made sense. She was probably never going to open the box again let alone read them. Yet she never seemed to find the time to pull the box out of the trench it had dug into her carpet. She’d have to tear them apart to start the fire properly. Maybe put one in whole so it would burn longer. Scarlet’s feet felt heavy as she watched the last of the newspaper crumple in the heat when suddenly a twig caught fire. She quickly shifted a few more twigs toward the flame. The fire grew slowly and Scarlet anxiously protected it from the wind. Eventually, the rotten moisture sizzled out of the wood and the fire jumped higher into the air. As the night grew deeper the flames licked the sky well above Scarlet’s head, mimicking the sway of the willow itself.

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YOU WILL BE GIVEN Ameya Calvocoressi Skidmore College

a journal that feels too heavy to open and— inexplicably— pencils. Everyone will tell you to write and you’ll try your best. Mandalas to color, always prefaced by the factoid about monks drawing them only to erase them in the sand. A breezy misnomer of a hospital gown, open to reveal your back. An exercise in anxiety when you are already fluorescently exposed. A blanket to drag, Linus-like, like a phase you thought you’d outgrown. Slippers and gray, beaded socks to ground your cold feet as they subtly shuffle a Thorazine dance. A 2-in-1 bottle of shampoo and body-wash that implies only the most temporary cleanliness, and two vulnerable towels that stop short at your hips accompanied by a frail washcloth that comes apart under the assault of the shower,

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but you will discover that you are not nearly so breakable and that, for better or for worse, youâ€™ll be everywhere you go.

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SPILLED MINT Ameya Calvocoressi Skidmore College

I ordered a mojito that I knew I’d hate to have something to hold besides your hand attracting mine like a hot stove. I knew by then not to dare. We’d shared two years of you smiling softly through my spills, my clothes spotted brown with coffee and orange with hot sauce— but that dinner when the brimming drink overflowed inevitably into my lap, you snorted without a drop of love: Really? And when shame spread through me like a stain I slammed my lips shut against my automatic apology and mumbled feebly, yes. Yes, really.

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CLADDAGH Mikayla Meyers Susquehanna University

Deemed a woman before the stainless steel, imported specially from Ireland, could wed my ring finger. So instead it made a mistress out of my pointer for about two and a half years until my body unveiled itself, exposed how fertile it had become. “Now listen, sweetheart, you wear it with the point of the heart pointing outwards so that your love is open to the world, but when you get married, you turn it so the point of the heart is leading up your arm, that way your love is closed off to the world because you have given it to your husband.” As if love were a gasoline valve, the friction of the reflective grey against my digit sparking the gas into an inferno. Still too young to handle matches, much less understand how to belong to a man. Officially declared a woman with a chain link of metal that screams like wedding bells when it drops on the bathroom floor. Its pure white shimmer stares back with the heat of sealed fate and a due date. Until that date, I do belong. Belong to a childish secret, to knowing glances, and woman’s lips colored in like a picture book. I belong in my grandmother’s stories, in a nation’s pride, to a paint splat of green on a map. I would belong there until I could belong to another, to an infant’s palm closed around my ring finger.

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SWALLOW THE FIRE Mikayla Meyers Susquehanna University

She said she liked to swallow fire because it tasted like her father’s cheek when he was on his deathbed. Said his skin felt like the bark of a giant sequoia tree against her seven-year old lips. That he tasted like the heat from the summer’s ash pit, like the gold-laced pages of the Iliad and the Odyssey. She said it was a way of life; keeping a fire kindled in our throats where angels like to play so that when it floats away it might help another dying spark grow mighty once more. When asked if it hurt she only smiled, retorted that it felt just like the time she had to swallow three teeth at once because she got into a fight with a boy on the playground over a squished worm: it didn’t cause her pain but made her choke on her next words. Her rebuttal to if she was afraid that the fire would cause her death was sharp as a cicada’s song. “Not at all,” she said. “Because I’ve seen a sequoia tree deep in the woods, and within its charred and sullen bark, it held a flame. The flame raged and it snapped its fangs at me from between the slabs of bark, yet the sequoia held fast without fear, swallowed the fire down like the black and white photo inside the gullet of my locket.”

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LETTER TO GEORGIA O’KEEFE Mikayla Meyers Susquehanna University

What would you say to a child’s pastel-bathed fingertips as they worked, determined to witness what you saw within each bodily curve of a flower’s lip and enveloping chastity? Would you have been ashamed that the child discarded their vibrant flower simply because another tormented her, jest that her Bleeding Heart looked like a vagina? What would you say if you knew she adorned the landscape that God had given her in shame? Obscuring her every bit of flesh in the scorching sun so as to avoid exposing her flourishing child-bearing hips? How would you paint her? As your Red Hills and Bones? Spine and femur weeping behind a fortress un-ventured? How would you paint her now? As she gags on her own sorrows projected as the fresh bands of femininity pressing to the surface? Would you paint her as Ram’s Skull with Brown Leaves? Stained and exhausted chasms curling as a falling fortress, weary from life as the still yet juvenile skin of her motherly promise began to stretch thin, seen as a cattle brand instead of warrior scars? What was it that you said? “I decided to start anew, to strip

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away what I had been taught.” To kneel to metamorphosis is the ultimate pilgrimage, and this child has become a woman. As you clench proudly at the meat of your breast, every shadow of your living corpse is beauty. How would you paint her now? As your Flower of Life II? The boiling blood of her heart performing a crescendo for her supple and full breasts, planting creation within her shy, pink carnation. Sensitive to touch. What was it again? “I feel there is something unexplored about women that only a woman can explore.”

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ON THE REDLINE Michael McGillicuddy Emerson College

a man saw me with a case of pabst blue ribbon and he told me in my home country guatemala i would cut into the sea with the boat i caught yellowfin and dorado on and buy fifty cases of that beer from a big ship owned by the united states navy and smuggle them in he said they sold quickly tariffs you see but iâ€™d always keep a few for myself itâ€™s good beer though i only drink whiskey now so we pulled in at park street and said have a good one and i went on my way to deliver the case of pbr for a girl with red hair just barely nineteen

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HAJJA RAZIA SHARIF SHEIKH PRIZES IN POETRY AND NONFICTION

It is our pleasure to announce the first Hajja Razia Sharif Sheikh Prizes in Poetry and Nonfiction. These prizes reward excellent undergraduates who are writing about the Muslim experience in America. The contest was made possible through a grant from Dr. Hamid Hussain Sheikh, Sr. and Amy Lee Sheikh. Dr. Sheikh wishes to honor his late mother, Hajja Razia Sharif Sheikh, by fostering a greater understanding of Islam. While the authors did not have to identify as Muslim to be awarded the prize, each piece had to speak in some way to the experienceâ€”joys and challengesâ€”of being Muslim in America today, in ways that educate and inform our readers. The Oakland Arts Review is interested in presenting the vibrancy and complexity of the American Muslim experience. We think this is an important contest at this moment in time. We hope that art can be a powerful vehicle for dialogue and understanding.

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HAJJA RAZIA SHARIF SHEIKH PRIZE 1ST PLACE — POETRY

ECHOES Ameena Chaudhry University of Iowa

Islam has always tasted like medicine like my mother’s voice as comfortable on my tongue as my own: “bismillah” as I sputter on thick cherry cough syrup. Islam is my best friend from elementary school who had all the answers but was far too beautiful for me to ever look inside her and find myself. Islam has always been a pair of jeans that fits badly – when my father died I threw out all of my clothes. I wear dresses now. Islam knows the sun like his lover she prays for him when he rises, when he falls and three times in between. She has never laid a hand on anyone except to help them up. I protect Islam like I protect my big sister, as worthy of worship in a boyfriend’s t-shirt as in a lace-trimmed hijab. Islam may never fit me perfectly, or show me any heaven I would love more

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than this trodden earth, but I keep her in my back pocket for old timeâ€™s sake. Bismillah.

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HAJJA RAZIA SHARIF SHEIKH PRIZE 2ND PLACE â€” POETRY

TO A PEACH TREE Sena Cebeci Princeton University

Do you remember the day you met her? Met her for real, I mean The real her You You were that boy we all knew in your old hand me down hair and spring fever sweat You with your throwaway smile In that way where she would throw it away every single time you offered it to her You with your skinny walnut limbs Such a self-conscious shade of walnut because her blush and the fact that she was pale enough that you could actually see her blushing made you feel browner by comparison You boy with your cracked eastern vowels and peach pit eyes You with the balls of your almond buttered olive branch feet bouncing

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on hot concrete no native sand in West Chester Pennsylvania to sink your soles into Nowhere to sink at all Even when she takes the peeled pomegranate of your heart and throws it where she threw your chiclet smile and it feels like she’s knotting all your cherry stem veins together and you open your peach pit eyes again wishing that just this once they would be the sky blue of the ceiling of your childhood bedroom But they are not And she is still pointing At you And then the airplane And she is still saying the words And all of a sudden you can’t even imagine her strawberry shortcake lips ever mouthing out anything other than what she calls you in front of her friends Bin Laden’s son So you close your peach pits to picture the day when you taught her how to taste honeysuckle from the bush in the neighbor’s back yard Hold back the beginnings of rosewater tears and try to paint the insides of your eyelids that pale honey color And I guess it’s a good thing you’re too dark to turn red It’s a good thing boys don’t cry It’s a good thing

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we all throw our date seeds in the trash now instead of burying them because we’ve finally accepted that they just can’t grow here It’s a good thing that by the time our religion becomes synonymous with the silence and breath-stealing flame of a bomb going off you will have already cut your ties to it And I guess it’s a good thing that I know you are going to learn to get better at begging for scraps at the edge of this girls table I mean It must be a good thing Right? That because of all this and her too You’ll waste so many slivers of your summer bronzed youth wondering why you didn’t get a seat at her feast Never even knowing that in every line of your keepsake smile in every vein of your date palm body in every shade of your peach pit eyes you were the entire bounty of the earth already written

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HAJJA RAZIA SHARIF SHEIKH PRIZE HONORABLE MENTION — POETRY

CAREFUL Zaynab Zaman Princeton University

You sit on the chapel steps and stare at the flag waving on top of Firestone plaza. Blue, white, red, without stars. An older man places a rose under the flag, whispering “Je suis Paris.” At least that’s what you think he said, because what else could it have been? Your politics professor asks if he is understanding you correctly. You don’t take advantage of the pause (he must have paused), because you hear him speaking before you have opened your mouth. The Middle East is always on the front page. I know you’re not saying that we ignore the terrible things that happen there. You swallow, shaking your head. You smile. You need him to smile back. Ignore the impasse, ignore the lump in your throat choking around the fact that you have never seen so many profile pictures filtered in one day. What a trivial, foolish thing to cling to. Your friend swerves into a narrow lane, forgetting her indicator. You are staying with her in North Carolina, and she promised to find the apartment where your family lived nineteen years ago. That one. She points two buildings over. And that’s where the Chapel Hill shooting happened. She looks at you, and you say nothing. You brush back a strand of your uncovered black hair. Your mother doesn’t cover her hair, either. It would not have been your family. Perhaps, though, he might have asked one question too many. Perhaps he would have paid too much attention. Perhaps you have no idea what could have happened, and you’re just trying to convince yourself that disguising your spirit is not hard. You are still on the church steps, even though your bitter coffee has grown frigid, even though your sweater is pulled tightly across your body and

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you are huddling. An elderly woman climbs the steps, looking at you with concern. Will you come to the service, dear? It is Sunday morning, and you are lost.

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HAJJA RAZIA SHARIF SHEIKH PRIZE 1ST PLACE — NONFICTION

CITIZEN Dalia Elhassan The New School

I carry visions of my home in my chest. Home is belonging to quivering sunset and the textured curve of a mango rind. It is what sky against skin looks like, and what the borders I find myself skirting contain. Home is a question of belonging that draws me back to childhood. It is the notion that someone that grew up tearing up maps of Africa and claiming other nationalities, someone who swallowed two other languages before her own and gutted her throat of any accent, who fashioned denial into the clothes she wore and the food she ate and in the hair she relaxed and refused to braid, couldn’t possibly do generations of Sudanese immigrants justice. They came toting impeccably dressed children—pants and checkered button-ups pleated sharply; hair laid, pressed, and braided; sandalwood musk behind the ears and on the necks—and put their best front forward. They fled the country not because of the war, like many of the Southerners, but from what Nigerian writer Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie calls “lethargy of consciousness.” It’s the drowsiness that names their bones fatigued, that beckons for visa applications and boarding passes. They will awaken in faster-paced places: the United Arab Emirates, Europe or the Americas. ***  New York, 1989. My father has slept in an attic stripped bare of warmth or dignity for a few months now. He’s become friends with the floorboards and the last two hundred dollars he made he strung onto a wire back to Khartoum. It is winter and this is the first time he’s left Sudan in his twenty-four years, the first time he’s felt a bitter cold and all he can say is that he never imagined

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snow to be so white. For the first month he works seven days a week and doesn’t have a word to describe the progression of time in American days. He doesn’t have the words or the language to say that day and night bleed into one another like watercolor on origami paper, or that he cannot understand how the Sun and moon meet on opposing sides of the same sky in the late afternoon, one glowing brilliantly orange as it sets and the other rising a dull yellow on the tail of the first. He recalls an ayah in the Quran that describes the way the Sun and Moon roll over one another, each running for an appointed time and decides that this will suffice. At this point, his legs are still good enough to stand on for fourteen, fifteen, sixteen hours a day and the diabetes hasn’t crept up on him quite yet. In ten years, the arthritis will come knocking on his right knee and kura, or soccer as the Amreekan call it, will be one of the first warmths he sacrifices on the bitter road of becoming American. ***  Miami, 2000. My mother is still the apple of her village tree but she’s fallen in a different country. In a photo, her skin is bright and pale (from the help of a compact powder three shades too light; this, however, she will not admit) and her eyebrows do not arch quite yet, but curve gracefully around her brow bone. Her hair is voluminous and chemically straightened, the strands stiff enough to pass as straight but not quite silky enough to be mistaken for a white woman’s. In another photo, her skin is the right shade of creamy brown (courtesy of a Cover Girl liquid foundation and the thought that, in America, it’s tacky to wear makeup that doesn’t match your skintone) and she is smiling with her arms crossed above the door of a 1995 Toyota Camry. It is dented, bought second-hand on a stranger’s front lawn in Liberty City. We take it home and a few months later, she gets her license and declares she is a woman now, more American than Sudanese. But her voice is still warm with a honey language, accent plump with memory and history. ***

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New York, 2015. Between 34th and 8th, a woman took claim of my body. Her right shoulder dug squarely into the valley of my chest and sends me flying, first backwards and then forwards. In my head, I observe it all with clinical precision. The car lights bend in the foreground. In the background, I see her lips moving. She’s called me something, but I can’t hear what. The red, white, and blue lights of Penn Station glow in my peripheral vision. When I turn and look back for her, she is already down the block, ambling from one foot to the next and doesn’t shove anyone else. Her hair dances in the space between her shoulders and neck. I try to catch someone’s eye, look for anyone who has witnessed this theft. The pain in my chest grows. It caves in when I find no kind faces and am met with empty stares. The air drops ten degrees, and I begin walking again. It isn’t until the lights grow into swollen orbs, looking more fit in the hands of a fortune teller than the street, that I realize I am sobbing and no one is meeting my gaze. ***  New York, 2015. Wednesday, 9 am. The N-400 application is heavy in my bag. Mama’s sitting next to me and whispering prayers into the stagnant air. Don’t worry, she says, you’ll pass this. I nod curtly. In the periphery, I glance at the others on this train, those whose eyes are trained carefully on flourescent phone screens or those whose gaze seems caught travelling through an endless tunnel, their vision hollow as they stare past my own eyes. I think to smile, perhaps breaking the morbid trance each of us exists in as we stare the other down, but I decide against it. I break eye contact when I notice mama’s turned to me again, lips moving nearly in time with the words of Kelly Clarkson’s Breakaway. It’s a song I’ve listened to when I needed strength to draw on without having to ask for it. Mama’s lips are pursed now. Simi’tini? Did you hear anything I just said? she quips. I shake my head no, could you please repeat that? She’s silent for a moment but turns back to her phone screen. I just wanted to tell you, she begins, that I’ve waited for fifteen years for this day. Maybe now my nightmares will be over. My brows furrow. I have to ask her why she would call this a nightmare.

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She’s silent again. The only thing I’ve ever prayed for was an easier life for you in this country. All those years finally paid off. She says all of this quietly and doesn’t look at me this time. She goes back to whispering her prayers, and I’m stunned silent by the power of a single navy blue book, the proclamation of belonging. I hold back tears, claiming so as not to ruin my mascara, mostly so as not to appear so affected. It’s just a test, I say back, knowing I’m being flippant, it’s just a single stupid, easy test. ***  New York, 2015. Outside the train station, I find the tail end of my scarf bunched in my hands and see it wet. I’ve walked three streets numb to how physically distraught I am. The skin on my chest is swollen and sensitive to the touch. On the platform, I stand close to the stairs and make sure to grab hold, afraid of the broken thought of being pushed. I’m not, and am grateful for the empty corner of the subway I am met with. My eyes are bloodshot, bruised and seedy like mishandled strawberries. I keep them trained on my flats until I feel a hand on my shoulder. I flinch. When I look up, I’m met with concerned eyes and a warm face. The face is a she, and she is wearing a satin white scarf around her head. In the crawl space between being invisible and hypervisible, she is the first person to see me tonight. Her lips are moving and I only briefly register concern before nodding my head. When she pulls me in for a hug, my spine shifts and I hang on tighter. In the moment my face is nestled against her right shoulder, I recall the bright-eyed girl who followed me onto Canal Street a few days before. She’s caught me on a street corner and asks if Muslims celebrate any holidays this time of year. I smile and say yes and no, offering explanation about the lunar calendar and dates shifting back eleven days each year. She nods, eyes smiling, and says she’s a Jew. Her family came as immigrants before World War 1. As replica Michael Kors wallets are shoved at us from every direction and my feet dance right and left navigating the streets, I feel her voice catch my hand and squeeze it comfortingly. My

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eyes are curious. She tells me don’t worry; this country has and always will be one of immigrants. Don’t worry, she pleads, just don’t worry. ***  New York, 2015. Wednesday, 10:52 am. Do you swear to tell the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth? The interviewer has his right arm held up and mine is a mirror to his. I smile, nod, chirp I do and sit. The test goes quickly. As he rails questions off my application back at me, I clench the fingers around my right hand tightly and say no when appropriate, answer with explanation when needed, and affirm without hesitation when most necessary. My lips are frozen in a cryptic smile and the upper half of my body speaks with ease. When his eyes fall on the last page of the test, he begins to draw broad red check marks across the answers I’ve marked yes. Do you support the constitution and form of government of the United States? I reflect on the early days of my childhood, on the books. Headlines roaring off the page with words I didn’t quite yet understand, Susan Sontag’s critiques of post-9/11 US foreign policy, and mostly, exploited images of the dead who were swallowed by grief, mostly poor and mostly colored. In the half-second pause I take to answer, I hear snippets of Suheir Hammad’s poem first writing since: there have been no words./i have not written one word./no poetry in the ashes south of canal street./ no prose in the refrigerated trucks driving debris and dna./not one word./i do not know how bad a life has to break in order to kill./i have never been so hungry that i willed hunger/i have never been so angry as to want to control a gun over a pen./not really./ricardo on the radio said in his accent thick as yuca, “i will feel so much better when the first bombs drop over there’’./a woman crying in a car parked and stranded. I offered comfort./a hand she did not see before she said, “we’re gonna burn them so bad’./my hand went to my head and my head to the dead Iraqi children, the dead in nicaragua, in rwanda who vie with fake sport wrestling for America’s attention./ people saying, this was bound to happen. let’s not forget U.S.

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transgressions./hold up, I live here./these are my friends and fam, and we’re not bad people./do not support America’s bullying. Yes, I answer, without a doubt. Suheir Hammad comes back again, I hear my thoughts in her voice. Shit’s complicated,/and I don’t know what to think.  Excellent, he says. Now, do you understand the full Oath of Allegiance to the United States? And are you willing to take the full Oath of Allegiance to the United States, including giving up all loyalty to prior nations of citizenship? My mouth dries. This isn’t a big deal, I think to myself, say yes because it isn’t a big deal. But the air has already shifted. I feel my right foot smack against the front of the desk, eager to cross the threshold of citizenship, cross into the threshold of comfort, of safety. My spine straightens, and I smile. In the crawl space between my eyebrows, a bead of sweat grows. I blink once and inhale. Before exhaling an exuberant yes, I see the words of Suheir’s poem bolden beneath my eyelids: i have never felt less american and more brooklyn,/the stars and stripes represent the dead as citizens first, /not/family members, /not lovers./the most privileged nation, most americans do not know the difference/more than ever, there is no difference. This is what it means to be finally be a citizen, I think, as I feel the singlesyllable word affirming my loyalty pass from my lips. When I reached down to grab my bag before I go to shake the interviewer’s hand, I blink back the bitter-sweet tears that welled between my lashes. I was told this was the most important moment in my life because I’d gained something so valuable; and yet, all I could feel in that moment was loss. ***  New York, 2015. Citizen. Noun. A legally recognized subject or national of a state or commonwealth, either native or naturalized. Legally recognized, legally represented. I’m staring down at a Google page with the definition panned up. There’s a fading bruise between my breasts where the woman hit me the week before. My breathing is no longer labored, my lungs heavy with a pain more abstract than literal. Being born in Sudan and raised in the US has been an experience of learning to live between the margins. It is making a home for myself on the back of a hyphen wedged

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firmly between Sudanese-American. It is finding comfort in being marginalized. I press my fingers gently against the tender skin. This must be what it means to be a Citizen.

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HAJJA RAZIA SHARIF SHEIKH PRIZE 2ND PLACE — NONFICTION

AL-KAFIRAH (THE UNBELIEVER) Mahalia Sobhani Northwestern University

Mahalia the Muslim Goes On A Date And Drinks Craft Beer And Is Interesting (September, 2016) I am on a date, which is unusual enough in itself, and I am in Andersonville, which is only slightly less unusual. I have let this young man develop the inaccurate impression that since I study creative writing, grew up in a moderately conservative Muslim family, and listen to sad music, I must be an interesting person with valuable insights. I can drive a stick shift and I have opinions about pineapple on pizza and I’d like to be a pescetarian but I’m not very successful at it, and that’s about as far as the interesting goes. And this show in Andersonville, which is probably the coolest thing I ever do in my free time. We go to the show and talk a little about experimental theater, the pros and cons of the brewery we went to earlier, the color of his shirt and my nail polish. This is our fourth official date. We do not talk about headscarves, bombings, the fact that he is black, or our fathers. It’s nice. The show is as good as I remember it, and he laughs a lot. It’s hard for me to tell if he’s ever having a good time around me. He says he is, but what else could he say? A white woman - a person who appears to be white and appears to be a woman and, for that matter, appears to be a person, but whose name is definitely Margaret - stands center stage and talks about an alligator farm in downstate Illinois. She visited the farm with some friends on a Tuesday. They didn’t know at the time. She doesn’t tell us what they didn’t know. At some point it becomes clear she’s talking about 9/11. There’s always a point, in any 9/11 piece, where that becomes clear, but I liked her piece because I couldn’t tell where that point was. This is the part where you can tell for mine, though. This is always the hardest part.

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It’s hard because it takes a fair amount of mental agility to have an emotional memory where there is no actual memory. I was six years old in 2001. I remember that I wore a red dress with a white collar and black poodles on it for my first day of first grade. I do not remember September 11th. I do, however, remember a piece of the aftermath: my mother on the phone, assuring someone that yes, we were all okay. Not because any of us had been near Ground Zero, but because a couple towns away, a Sikh man had been beaten up outside a gas station, and hijabis were afraid to go out with their headscarves. That may have been the first time I counted myself lucky to have light skin. This fragment of memory was almost certainly invented by my subconscious to compensate for not remembering the actual day of the tragedy, because there is no way my six-year-old self could have absorbed and processed a moment of that much complexity. It’s a strange guilt that I have about it. I was young, but most other people my age, Muslim or not, seem to remember something about the day. Whether or not it’s a fabrication of the subconscious seems irrelevant to them. What is my excuse? What gives me, an American Muslim, the right to have no memory of the day that is ever-present in the consciousness of my people? Mahalia the Muslim Forgets Things A Lot My paternal grandfather died of Alzheimer’s when I was eight, and my only memories of him are from the late stages of his disease. My siblings and I called him Dada, the Bangla word for grandfather. I would help my grandmother make his meals: Eggo toaster waffles, soaked in Ensure. He could not speak intelligibly, or move his left arm. As far as I could tell at eight years old, he was a zombie. After he died, we moved his blue armchair to the basement. I used to yell at people who sat in it during parties. My maternal great-great-aunt Grace is living with Alzheimer’s, physically functional but with significant memory loss and dementia. I don’t like old people to begin with and I never liked her. She never had children and was often snappish to me and my siblings when we were young. Now she doesn’t remember who we are. At her sister’s funeral, she was confused, thinking that her mother was the one who had passed away. “Where is Doris?” she kept asking, angry and scared. “She’s going to want to say goodbye to Mother.” These moments make good stories and they give me nightmares. Since I

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believe in no God and no afterlife, my only soul is my brain. My personality lives in my memories and experiences. If I lose that, I lose myself. I take all the appropriate precautions: I do jigsaw puzzles, crosswords, even Sudoku, which I hate. I try to brush my teeth with my left hand occasionally. I eat a lot of seafood. I don’t actually know if that helps but I think I read somewhere that it does. I read a lot of things and I don’t remember what comes from where. I write everything down because I’m afraid I’ll forget it and then I forget where I wrote it down. I am consistently about ten minutes late to all engagements. But I am not scatterbrained. Definitely not. I know where all my brains are - right here - reaching, reaching for something just beyond. My memory is not a colander or a cup filled to the brim; it is a murky swamp, endless and impassable. Everything is there, the alligators just below the surface, eyes blinking slow. I am unable to tell them apart from the logs. So it bothers me that I can’t remember 9/11, even though it’s ridiculous to expect myself to remember something from when I was six. Not only do I feel a moral obligation as an American Muslim to have a meaningful emotional relationship with that day, I see my inability to remember it as a sign that my mental faculties, the core of my very self, are already degenerating, even though that’s almost certainly not true. I’m only twentyone, after all. My body won’t start dying faster than it regenerates until I’m about twenty-five. Mahalia the Muslim Likes 80s Movies And Cultural Superstitions I don’t remember much but I remember what it felt like to believe. Even now, in my godless college days, it comes back to me in bits and pieces. I do remember the smell of henna paste late at night, always late at night. A leafy, low smell, kind of like old rain. My sister and I sitting crosslegged on the floor of our room, hands in each other’s laps, watching Friday Night Lights or Back to the Future, depending on which one of us won the argument over who gets to pick the Netflix. Her mehendi designs are slowly, painstakingly executed, intricate. I move faster, with heavier lines, but mine always last longer. Or breaking fast at the end of a long day in Ramadan. It’s so hard to explain why I loved not eating for fourteen hours, why it was like Christmas morning every night, delirious excitement at the bounty in front of our faces, whether it was a cheese pizza or my grandmother’s fried eggplant. Lemonade always ending up far too sweet because we couldn’t taste it

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to check for the sugar. Flaky pastries stuffed with chicken, savory shrimp french toast, chunks of fruit in cloudy Tupperware containers. How to explain why we do the little things we do? I can explain the prayers and the headscarves, but I can’t explain why we don’t put books on the floor, or why we always take money with the right hand. Why do we drink black tea with half-and-half and sugar at all hours of the day and night, why do we leave the windows open when it rains, why don’t we ever kill spiders or let a dog walk where we sleep. I know the parables that explain most of these little practices (what are we practicing for? Are there such rules of cultural etiquette in heaven?), but when I tell them, I feel everyone around me grow a little more confused. Why do we say the same thing when we lose our keys and when someone dies? To God we belong and to Him we all return. My grandmother still cries every time we pass by my grandfather’s grave, but at least there is no question for her in her mind about which are the alligators and which the logs. She knows her place in the universe, and it involves a set of plastic prayer beads and a threadbare prayer mat. She knows she will see him again. We American Muslims go about our day-to-day lives without explicitly knowing or understanding why, feeling vaguely like we might not belong here, we might not be doing this right, but persisting nonetheless. My dad just bought a large American flag from Sam’s Club to put up outside our door, “to scare away the Trumpers,” he said. My grandmother is very excited to vote for Hillary Clinton this November. I’m happy for both of them. I am not what anyone wants to see in the Muslim American narrative. I don’t write about the metaphorical significance of my grandmother’s cooking. I don’t cultivate my Instagram presence around hijab trends. And I can’t romanticize the moments before dawn when my father wakes me up to pray. I don’t see God any better at four in the morning. I am too white, too unfashionable, and too sexually active to be a suitable poster child for the Muslim American experience. I drink too much and pray too little. The communal cultural memory of Islam has failed to take root in me, it seems. Yet here I am. I am not at peace with my intersecting identities because the world that created those identities will not let me be, and as long as I am not at peace, I will make sure no one else is, either. America may claim to be a melting pot, but for something to melt it needs to be heated beyond the point of holding itself together. Here, in the form of this essay, comes an indictment, a reckoning, a blowtorch. Pick yourselves apart and examine the pieces as I have done, try to remember what is real and what is not, and

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melt them back together with joyful, indiscriminate, reckless abandon, for they are all you. I have opinions on pineapple on pizza and I’m supposed to have opinions on 9/11 and the invasion of Iraq and Assad’s regime and the attempted military coup in Turkey and headscarves and polygamy and pork. And I do have opinions on all of those things, because I don’t have the privilege not to. Yes, it is a privilege to be allowed to be ignorant, to be allowed to have no opinion on mosque surveillance, the burkini, or Donald Trump. How I wish I could be allowed not to care about whatever viral form of Islamophobia is trending on Facebook next week, because this caring is exhausting, and part of me wants to be pleasantly uninteresting and generally content. Instead, I’m a Muslim, whether or not I want to be, whether or not the rest of the world wants me to be. And that’s about as far as the interesting goes. Mahalia the Muslim Has A Summer Job (July, 2016) / Mahalia the Atheist is a Muslim Snacktime at work is pandemonium. A critical mass of children in an enclosed environment, with just enough food that everyone can have a little but no one can have enough, prompts one to reflect on the beastly origins of humankind, from which we are perhaps not so far removed as we thought. Also, chaos, and entropy, and stuff. I sit at a table with a group of young boys, which the rest of the summer camp staff is avoiding because they are loud and tend to throw things. A slight eight-year-old who has been teaching me to shoot free throws in the mornings sits across from me in a muscle shirt. He looks at my name tag, which shows my full name, for a long moment, munching his Doritos. “Miss Mahalia, are you a Christian?” “No, I am not.” “Are you a Muslim?” “Yes, I am.” This is not entirely true, but it’s the true answer to the questions he’s really asking. His face lights up and he sits up a little straighter. “Me, too!” I smile back and tell him that’s great. “Where are you from?” “Wisconsin.” This is true, but it’s not the answer to the question he’s really asking, which comes next. “Where are your parents from?”

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“My mom is from Wisconsin and my dad is from Bangladesh.” “Where’s that?” I tell him. He nods. “My dad is from Turkey.” “That’s really cool,” I say. I am scanning the cafeteria for runners, fights, thrown food, spilled milk, and there is a calm ten seconds where I’m thinking vaguely of baklava and roast lamb, before I remember what I’ve been seeing in the news lately. In my memory, the alligators turn listlessly in the mud. I look at this little boy, who is not looking at me. He is smashing his Doritos inside their bag with careful precision. Many of the kids do this, to make it last longer, they say. “Things are not so good in my country right now,” he says, still smashing his chips. “Yeah,” I say. “Things are not so good in my country, either.” Those words stick in my mouth, my country. “I think a lot of people are getting hurt.” The chips are now a fine orange crumble. “Yeah,” I say, “I think you’re right.” I don’t remember what was said next. All I know is that for the past two years I have been a bitter and reluctant Muslim, cursing the circumstances of my birth that landed me with a religious identity that I have to carry regardless of my actual spiritual beliefs or lack thereof. All I know is that I still feel obligated to answer yes when a child asks me that question, that dreaded question, “Are you a Muslim?” What a loaded question, and the wrong one. No, not a wrong one, a coded one. He doesn’t mean do you believe in one God, and Muhammad his Prophet and Messenger. He doesn’t mean do you pray five times a day. He means are you one of us, are you like me, are you hurting too? And the answer to that is still yes

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The Oakland Arts Review would like to express its deepest gratitude to Dr. Hamid Hussain Sheikh, Sr. and Amy Lee Sheikh for their generous support of this prize and for their passion for social justice. We would also like to thank Basma El-Bathy and Katie Hartsock for being the guest judges for this contest. Their time and insight were priceless. Basma El-Bathy is a lecturer in the International Studies program at Oakland University and was a faculty member at Wayne State University. Her interdisciplinary courses focus on the history and societies of the Middle East and Muslim world. Her research interests on the Middle East include identity formation and expression in the modern era, contemporary political communication, and the intersection of traditional and new media on public opinion formationâ€”an area on which she presented academic papers in international conferences in the Middle East and Europe. She holds an MA degree in Near Eastern languages and cultures from Wayne State University. Katie Hartsock is an assistant professor of English at Oakland University. Her first book of poems, Bed of Impatiens, was published in 2016 by Able Muse Press. Her work has appeared in various journals, including Arion, Beloit Poetry Journal, Massachusetts Reviews, Southwest Review, and a blank verse essay is forthcoming in The Wallace Stevens Journal.

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HER MIDDLE NAME IS JOY, AND IT SHOULD BE Brandon Hansen Northern Michigan University

You and I, and him, on this couch, your Halloween house party, I smell: sliced pumpkins, vanilla candles, thirty-five friends, your engagement ring, his hand in your hair. Your feet are hidden under the yellow blanket and you push your toes under my calves. Maybe you mean it, maybe it’s just a small couch, maybe you forgot that he can do jiu-jitsu, he can do backflips, he laid the kitchen tile like a laser, I paint the painter’s tape. He makes you laugh. Jesus, he makes me laugh. When he goes to the bathroom, and he can’t see, you lean on me, your temple, my body, and maybe you shouldn’t. Maybe I shouldn’t balance you, my hand, your back, you aren’t clumsy, you aren’t falling, I know it. Maybe we shouldn’t trail each other’s fingers on each other’s fingers on the hand off of pens and little things and everything. But you are paper and you pick me up like moisture.

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Listen, I should whisper. Not this time, no, not when we’re two humans at a party, or two humans writing in the grass, or two humans whose forehead and lips once brushed. No, I should whisper. Wait until we’re two foxes and we nip thistles from each other’s paws, wait until we’re two lily pads and we tangle, wait until we’re the same dust in the same moon. Next time, I should whisper, next time.

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PRANAYAMA Abigail Newhouse Utah State University

Do you have the patience to wait until the mud settles and the water is clear? —Tao Ching Yoga Teacher asks us to contemplate Tao Ching’s words of wisdom as we sit, legs crossed, eyes closed, gently rocking from one side to the other. I try to picture the mud settling as it normally would, but in my head the water purifies in milliseconds. We are asked to clear our minds. I do my usual routine– put all my thoughts into a gray suitcase, click it shut, send that suitcase into oblivion, picture a white wall, which is a mistake as it inevitably becomes a blank slate. I am nine years old, stepping in soggy footprints between pebbled sand. I stand on a mound made of various stones; their bodies tumbled, swished, made smooth. I see the ocean through fog, watch the white foam crash and slide towards me, and as soon as the water reaches a new line, it fades back into the crowd. The ocean has a system. It crashes, crawls and fades. That will never change, unless the moon chooses another planet to orbit. I hold my hands in front of me. When the ocean pulls back, I push my hands forward. When the ocean approaches me, I pull my hands closer to my chest. I control the ocean. It’s guided by me.

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*** Rope lights line the perimeter, adding a soft glow to the gym studio. I lay on my mat, eyes closed, palms facing upward. I’ve turned my hands so much that my forearms are strained. Yoga Teacher tells us, “Psychologists say that ninety-eight percent of the fears we think of over and over again will never happen.” We are on the second level. Outside our sanctuary, men drop barbells with abandon. The same thought crosses my mind that always crosses my mind when I am on the second level. It’s an image: me lying on the floor, the floor cracking all around me, me falling to the bottom level, either crushing someone beneath me, or one of their possessions. The walls would fall in and bury me.

The kid’s menu at Mo’s restaurant has a terrifying picture of a boy being pulled into the ocean by a riptide. His face is an exclamation point and his hands reach for the sand castle he’ll leave behind. I have a system that correlates with the ocean’s system. I hold my arms up and crash into the wave, crawl onto the board, and fade into the sand. I ride them like ice. I am on top of the wave, and I am in control. I swim out farther, deeper, against the tide for better waves. I float using my board for support and watch the waves in the distance, huge and menacing and beautiful. I turn towards the beach and think of the sand castles I’d leave behind. ***

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Yoga Teacher tells us to breathe, to focus on the rhythm. “Inhale the good in your life, and exhale all fear. Surrender to the universe.” I attempt the tree pose, Vrksasana. The breathing roots me, connects me to the earth. But still, I wobble. My toes try to wrap around the cushion of the mat, mind begging with body – stay up, stay balanced, please (to the tiny bumps on the mat) suck my foot into you and plant me. “To surrender does not mean to give up; it means you are willing to go with the flow of the current, instead of trying to swim against it.” If I were really a tree, and not just posing as one, I’d be a palm tree, swaying, fending off crashing waves, and leaning dangerously to the right until I Exhale.

I want to share my beach with you. We explore tide pools, see bright pink starfish and watch crabs scuttle anywhere but near us. We sit on a log and you stare at the low tide. You tell me you almost drowned once on the Snake River in a rapid called Champagne. You thought you’d die as you whirled and swirled in the depth, breath held for too long. The pull of the tides underneath dragged you down, down until black and bubbles blocked your vision, and abruptly the water shot you out. I know the feeling of losing breath to circumstance.

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Suddenly waves and water and walking and breathing and having a body all seem dangerous. You’re fickle and I’m fickle and waves can crash right through us. I could put a lifejacket on you, tie a rope around your waist, and only then let you float but that’s not all we’d have to worry about.

“May we exist like the lotus, at ease in muddy water.” The ocean water is muddy. It’s full of darkness and discovery and secrets and errors and salt and on top the surface shines. And while waves are calm, they most certainly are not. I lay in Savasana, floating like a lotus despite whether or not the water settles. I close my eyes, center my body, and breathe.

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WHAT I REMEMBER Julieanna Herriven Catawba College

What I remember is my parents standing in front of me shoulder to shoulder. My mom’s dark curls tied up into a messy knot. Shoes on the wrong feet, laces undone, and her pajama pants dragging across the grass. My dad standing a head higher than her, wiping his hands across the sides of his baggy, blue jeans. Sweat soaking through the back of his shirt. I couldn’t see their faces but I know their eyes were glazed in horror and exhaustion. In front of them a red brick house seemed to have been taken apart like Legos, the ceiling no longer white but bright blue, spotted with fluffy clouds, and trees snapped in the middle of their trunks like the toothpicks my dad leaves on the coffee table. A news anchor, dressed in a dark skirt suit with neat hair flowing around her face stood in our front yard. We could catch the phrases F1 tornado, formed in Jacksonville, followed Catfish Lake Road, only this house, family of three. The reporter pinched a small pink bear, flat and limp, between her perfectly done nails. A bear that used to comfort me as I slept now being used to comfort unknown viewers that this wasn’t their home. She speaks of how it’s a miracle we are alive, how we can salvage some items, and how we have so much help from the community. But those are not the things I remember most. I remember a large woman, in shorts and an oversized shirt. Sunken eyes, sagging skin, and missing teeth. Placing a green bin filled with cookware, photo albums, and a Pooh Bear blanket into the trunk of her van, driving off never to be seen again. She didn’t know that the blanket was the last thing my mother had of my older sister. She didn’t know that my mother used that blanket to catch her tears after she begged my sister to stay home. I remember the firefighter who rescued my chinchilla. Wearing full gear even though there was no fire. As he handed the small, gray ball of fluff to my father he said, “You do know it is dangerous to nail doors shut,

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you should have bought a new one.” He didn’t know that the day before an unknown stranger had kicked down that door and stolen from us. He didn’t know that my parents had spent the last of their money on the water bill. I remember the man dressed in a black shirt, a white rectangle at his throat. He spoke to my parents and me about God. He told us we deserved God’s wrath for not attending church, when his was only across the street. He didn’t know that before every game I held my teammates hands and bowed my head in prayer. That my parents and I sit on the grass at church services every Sunday at the softball field. I remember the miracles, just not as clearly. I don’t remember what the Marine who found my scrapbook looked like and I don’t remember the name of the woman who brought my family dinner. I remember, after my sister found out that the blanket was stolen, she actually talked with our mom for the first time in seven years. I remember my dad thanking the firefighters and police officers for their help afterwards. I remember holding my parent’s hands in prayer at night when we finally got to rest. Because these are things I’ll remember most.

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MULTISTORY CJ West Emerson College

a body in a home a bullet outside of a casing itself a ghost looking through the windows: itself spinning buildings into studio apartment wide open street lamp held inside plastic cover humming glow soaked in wet air hot to the touch

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JUICING BRUISES CJ West Emerson College

enjambment is to straddle as metaphor is to carry across or into. what tone does “lifted leg” suggest? which sounds express how molten raspberries become? if bent frame and measured hand fall impress more than split stem of spine; disc stretch and switch, execute: clarify, cut, and condense, undress— after all, poets breathe staggered, only hurt in myth, organic sense twisted by muscle memory, verb tense. your mouth, sonnet, little sound. my arms, your body, volta, flip. write melting skeleton, shape shift melt into sore moan, reposition arched back, rewind, extract, unzip, strip, sprinkle your dissolve onto our headstone, or headboard. look at the wood, splintering from inside, what pretty pink stains, flesh marooned and liquefied.

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AT OUR FUTURE HOME IN BATH Gabrielle Tribou Florida State University

Sometime between shots eight and nine I curled up among a colony of fire ants and wondered aloud how the grass could itch so bad. Sweet Lauren, I’m sorry I never learned how to forgive you for not being me. These days, I think about that time at the front of the bus, our well-walked shoes leaving streaks against the window. You said you would follow me anywhere. And yes, I am sure there were times when loving me must have felt like kneeling for prayer in a bed of fire ants. But Lauren, do you remember the night you drank too much and couldn’t puke? Like any true friend, I took my two best fingers and strummed the back of your throat. Isn’t it amazing, the seconds that can fill the space between a bite and its pain? The morning after the ants, I walked home on a leg large and red, and found you in the kitchen, a glass of milk in your hands.

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AMERICAN MESSIAH Sebastian Romero University of Iowa

I am made and remade continually. Different people draw different words from me.  —Virginia Woolf, The Waves For Priscila Since bout last month I ain’t got no home; not that I am homeless—I ain’t—just got no home. I ain’t talkin bout that home-is-where-yourfamily-is, home-is-where-you’re-loved goddam crap, but an actual, solid home. I live, or more like, I sleep at the Millenial Park, between Columbus and Lake Shore. Chicago, Illinois, that’s where I’m from; born and bred; and I ain’t never gonna leave. I love this goddam city: it gave me Fiona, my beautiful wife, and four baby girls. And I—oh no my wife’s not here, they’re not here. They went to her mother’s house, back to the farm. She told me to go, to follow, but I ain’t never gonna go to Indiana, of all the goddam states. She said she’d wait, she did; said she’d wait ‘till I got my job back, or got a new one, I told her, I said baby, you ain’t gonna have to wait much longer; I’ma be the boss one day, you just wait and see, baby, just wait and see. She said she’d come back when I proved her. You see, I lost my job: new boss, didn’t like my style, too old-school he said, he said he needed quicker people, and I said ain’t nothin quicker than a fortyyear-old man with no job, no education and seven mouths to feed (her parents live with me you see), but he ain’t listen, and so I left. What? No, no, they didn’t fire me, you misunderstood; I know what I said, and I ain’t said that; you misunderstood, I left, I quit. I’m a man with some integrity left, you know? You know, the problem ain’t him, he ain’t got nothin on me, but people like him, and every-fuckin-one who claps every time people like him open their goddam mouths. It ain’t only the government, it’s ‘bout bigger things, it’s ‘bout the empty people, ‘bout how empty they

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all are nowadays. It wasn’t like that in my time. Ain’t makin them like me anymore, they don’t, you see? I was the best employee they got, just ‘cus I didn’t have no paper to prove my worth ain’t mean nothin. They don’t have nothin on me. I left with my dignity. And truth be told I’m happy like this, I ain’t no homeless guy, just a guy with no home for now. I’ll get off these streets any day now, any day I tell you. You’ll see me givin you coffee next week on your favorite Starbucks, or orderin the games section on some goddam Target. Then in a couple’f months I’ll be goddam runnin the place, I tell you—you don’t believe me, do you? I tell you, any day now, any day, you’ll see me, I’ll be your boss one day, I tell you. Ain’t you come tell me, in your black and white suit, that you’re better than me. No, now don’t you tell me you ain’t said nothin; I know people like you, I used to work for ‘em, don’t you tell me nothin. I know many things you ain’t never gonna dream on knowin. What a goddam joke, people tryin to pretend they ain’t what I already know they are! I know all sorts of people, and yours are the worst, and I ain’t never wrong with these things, I know it when I know it. Now don’t you come and tell me I don’t. Now, now, I didn’t mean that, I’m sorry, I just get so goddam mad when people lie. I didn’t mean to get violent with you I goddam swear, I ain’t never hit no one. I’m as peaceful as a fish, and not those grey big sharks, but as a small one: I’m quiet and peaceful. Fiona always made these mad mad stories where she invented things I did, people I screamed at and hit and everythin, she even said once that that’s why I got no job, ‘cus of my anger, but she’s just like that sometimes: real mean. She knows I hate it when she says real mean things to me, that’s why she says them. To try and make me do things. But I never fall, and I know they’re only stories, like the ones she tells my little girls to make them behave. That’s why if you talk to her, don’t believe a word she says. She tells stories sometimes; she says I’m angry but I ain’t, I ain’t what she says I am. Momma raised me right, you see? The only man I’ve ever hit was Quentin Fitzpatrick, and just ‘cus he was goddam mean and he tried to get into my sister’s pants. I never met him but once, that day, and I beat the crap outta him. Ain’t no one gonna joke with my sister. Oh yes! I have a sister: good ol’ Fanny, sweet as sugar and pretty as hell. She told me to stay at her house, to stay for a while, but I told her she ain’t got to worry ‘bout no damn thing. She has a crowded house already, a man, three teenagers and a couple of baby twins. Cutest things ever born, I goddam swear. I’ve always wished I had pulled my shit together, and gotten a couple of little babies. But I never quite did, and

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that’s okay. I was always busy with work, you see? I was a manager at an hotel. I heard from Fanny just last week. She wrote to me. We keep in touch, we were always close, since babies. She’s always been my baby sister, and ain’t nothin gonna change that. I have a letter from her, actually. Wanna see it? Here, have a look. Yes, I know it’s yellowin. I just got it last week. It’s not old, I swear. Only got it last week. No, what are you sayin? I know it says that it’s from nineteen-eighty-nine, she must’ve used an old envelope, ‘cus she sent this last week only. You think I’m crazy, right? You callin me crazy? Ain’t you tellin me that, I know when I got this letter. Were you there? Stop speakin nonsense, I know what year it is. Watch your goddam fuckin mouth. Stop it. Are you a brute? I told you I just got it last week. I’ve got some friends, you know? You ain’t gonna know what hit you if you don’t stop botherin the crap outta me. Stop sayin you didn’t say anythin, I know what you said. You callin me a liar then? You callin me a goddam liar? Fuck you. You, with your white and black and white suits! Oh, I get it... who are you? Who sent you? Did someone send you? Did they tell you I know somethin, ‘cus I don’t; I ain’t know nothin. You need somethin? It’s gettin late, I need to go. No, no, don’t touch me, don’t goddam touch me, I need to go home, my wife is waitin for me, it’s gettin late, and I’ve got to go home. Please don’t follow me. I already told you, I ain’t know nothin, I ain’t know what they told you, but they’re nothin but liars, like that fuckin ol’ Steve O’Molly. He was a fuckin liar; beat the crap outta him, I tell you. Him and all his friends. I’ve got to go, it’s my son’s thirteenth birthday, you see? And I can’t be late: he’s my only son, my wife couldn’t get pregnant after that. Good ol’ Quentin, he’s turnin thirteen today, we’re goin to let him sleep late, watch some—what do you mean they’re not here? Oh, I said no such thing, why would they be in Indiana? My wife’s parents didn’t even make it to the States. She’s been here alone, my beautiful Susan, since she was eleven. She lived in a park very much like this back in Miami. That’s where I met her, my beautiful bride: at a park much like this one. She convinced me to come here, really; she’s convinced me of many many things over these long, awful years, and comin to Chicago was one of them. I used to live in Miami with her. But we came; I came ‘cus I love her, I goddam do, don’t let anyone say I don’t, ‘cus I do. She lets me see how great I am, and she lets me like me more. That’s what happens in love, I reckon: the person makes you feel as if you’re goddam salvation. Look, look! There she comes. I’m so happy, and she looks so pretty. You

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see, today’s our weddin day. Oh, well you know that, of course. That’s why you’re dressed like that, all suited up and everythin... Right? Are you a friend of hers, my Susan? Are you here for our weddin? It might rain. She told me in the morning. I really hope it doesn’t. No one wants rain on their goddam weddin day... But that’s okay, I don’t see no goddam cloud. You’re with Fiona right—I mean Susan... I mean, I mean... Oh, hey, I think I’ve seen you around? Do I know you? You look a lot like some boss I had when I was younger. But well, I gotta go, it’s my son’s birthday. Have you seen him? He was... I think he was just here. Will you tell him I’m still lookin for him? We haven’t talked in so long. I do miss him some of these days, don’t never say I ain’t. He must be with Fanny. She’s my wife, I tell you... Oh, no, no, she’s my sister, good ol’ Fanny. Haven’t talked to her in ages, we had a big fight. She said to her husband I took adv—well, that I did things to her, but I did no thing, I tell you. I as good as any American, I tell you, I goddam do: good as any American. Did you hear me? Are you listenin? Why are you starin? Who are you? Are you lost? Are you lookin for somethin? Do you have a dollar? Some food? Some change to spare for this godforsaken old man?

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SAMMA-VAYAMA Rachel Ann Girty Northwestern University

Cold doorknob and footfall and intimacy of key in keyhole. Then the mute hallway, elevator stomach, headlights. Ceiling fan. You’re living out of order. You finger the lock, check the deadbolt. It’s a page in a mystery novel you don’t remember reading. Strange syntax and a thumbprint of mascara in the corner. Open in your lap. Another page and clots of ink so black the black splits into its elements: the blue of headache vision, the red you wash from your fingertips some mornings. You’ve lost the page again. You smear tearwater on the headboard, a condition of insomnia. It isn’t the sleep itself that’s the problem; it’s the way you hydroplane into it, an aerodynamic mess, pushed around and pushed around in the wind.

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ODE TO DRIVING 120 MPH Aaron Leininger California State University, Chico

Somewhere between Redding and Chico on my way back from the cemetery to another dignified institution where they know nothing of my savage happiness at such momentsâ€” I press the pedal down turn up the radio and the old exhilaration comes like always unbidden stinging my flesh all over like thin needles of light and sunlight crashes electric guitars into the landscape a jet draws a line in the blue sky like an arrow pointing endlessly upward a wild rose bush crushed against a hillside reaching out in ecstatic bursts of color in unbearable excess of joy and abandon

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punching through fences knocking gates wideopen telephone wires thrum in harmony hung like harp strings in graceful loops to accompany the musicâ€” possibility expands along the horizon birds are a careless touch of joy of genius roadside gravesites flash in the light of the sun almond trees, poppies, lilies bloom at high velocity pink orange purple and white in accelerating ecstatic firework display after your death and nearly my own nothing has really mattered much but this delicate and intermittent vision of living more aware of my own mortality now, maybe, but so motherfucking alive

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ON THE FORMATION OF VEGETABLE MOULD THROUGH THE ACTION OF WORMS, WITH

OBSERVATIONS ON THEIR HABITS

Benjamin Kuzava Central Michigan University

Darwin said most everything was passed many times through, and will again pass many times through, the intestinal canals of worms. This is the way the world goes: we are not here alone, but what’s waiting after us is only meant to swallow it all. Is it wrong to want you still here, to dig my jaw in the soil over your gravestone, to eat my way toward the dead body you threw away while messed up on heroin? I don’t trust anything I want to say. When a worm burrows, it passes dirt through its body to reshape landscape— one body breaking another open. This is the only way I know how to unkill you.

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Whether it’s true or not, I’m here to digest you. Pass your suicide through my insides, let something that can’t kill itself grow where you wouldn’t.

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VIGNETTE: DECEMBER IN MICHIGAN Benjamin Kuzava Central Michigan University

When I pull up to your house, I donâ€™t know youâ€™re dead yet. Your family waits on the chilled December lawn like scattered candles driven into place in the dirt. The garage where you hung the rope seems so unlike the garage we used to hang out in. Passersby might imagine your family a gentle light on the outskirts of town, but I can only feel the burning as I close the distance between your brother and I. If I did not yet know that he found your body in pendulum this afternoon, I did.

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PRAYERS TO SPIDERS Zane Johnson University of Colorado Denver

Till the gossamer thread you fling catch somewhere, O my soul —Walt Whitman 1. If you find a beetle under the sink, sucking the crystals off of the water heater, be still: it is only life— this miraculous functioning. If you find a maggot, bloated with syrup from the soda fountain drain nearing death, stay your hand. The hexagons in the sockets are cold and will yet reduce. A little wing unused will crumble warm in your palms. 2. In a memory, I see it churning in the birdbath. We sprayed a round of Raid so we didn’t have to do it. Then we let our BB guns unload, our mythological selves alone, guilty. I was too young to know that I had done this many times before, across millennia.

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Perhaps it was some final triumph over prehistory, the spider ricocheting off the first stone cast through the cosmos only to land tightly curled behind the AC, wherefrom, to this day, thin legs protrude. 3. In the beginning there was a spider bite. Now every year we gather around a fire and take turns stomping a rubber effigy, but not before teasing the lesser of us by tossing them the things while they slept. We are now very, very sorry. After the live ones began disappearing, some slipped into apostasy, claiming their toes were never gnawed on, and we lost something grave. 4. And you, spider behind the living room painting, I will not begrudge you your revenge. We are intimately entangled. Inseminate this painting, this mirror of cosmic action, with your filament

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filament filament. Where it comes from is thick and cerebral enough to squash us both. If we must herald civilization, we must have reasons to not love. If we must scuff away the webs from this work inside the dining room, the latter is less real. This is the secret that all spiders know, as they are allowed to die again and again to their true lovers. (How do you love better than these small deaths?) 5. (Remember: if an oily jumper bears her front legs to you, it is only that you have done the same, and you do, bearing the shoe down on a crisp skull.) 6. Beneath the carpet dust, a shriveled millipedeâ€” ancient, hollow, godlike. Its divine progenitorâ€™s thousand breaths will heave new generations to suckle the dirt. It is dust, we are dust,

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on the bones beneath the dust were instructions to be large and terrible. I ask for more dust of refuge on our works to lurk in.

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A VISIT TO BISABUELA Estefania Acquaviva Villanova University

The sun heated the wrought iron gate where wasted paint had given way to the rusting underneath. Getting out of the car, Mama and Sofia then stood waiting at the steps of the gate, and blinked in the noon brightness. Sofia sneaked a peak up at her mother, between scratching a bug bite on her arm, and reminiscing about the unfinished cereal abandoned in the rush to leave at last notice. Although Sofia appeared pristine on the outside, her sweaty legs were itchy in their tights and her new shoes pinched her toes, and were already causing blisters. Mama had insisted to Carmela, the overworked nanny, that Sofia had to dress in her best clothes for today’s visit. Despite her grumbling stomach, Sofia knew not to voice her many complaints to Mama, deciding to withhold her comments until she and Carmela were alone later. “I expect you to act como una princesita,” Mama said to Sofia. Sofia did not spend much time with Mama, and it was only at these rare moments she could fully appreciate her mother’s elegant beauty. Black waves of hair were styled around her creamy olive face, and large sunglasses hid her eyes of jade from the noon light. Though they did nothing to remove the disappointed stare analyzing each of Sofia’s flaws from top to bottom. “Carmela,” Mama sighed, and then turned to the quiet woman in their shadow. “I told you to tie the white ribbons on each of the braids, not leave them hanging loose.” “Perdon, Señora,” was all Carmela answered. She moved to adjust them into the correct shape and size. The gate buzzed open, and the three of them—accompanied by one of the gate’s stoic guards—made their way up the long driveway on foot. “Mama,” Sofia raised her voice from a whisper. Curiosity had gotten the best of her. “Why are we here today?” “This is the home of your bisabuela. She raised your father and Tío Oscar, after their parents died in an accident. Sofia, promise me that you will

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behave today. This visit is very important. Stay very quiet. Smile, and don’t forget por favor y gracias, once we go in.” “I promise, Mama,” Sofia replied. She tried to find approval in her mother’s face, but the perfect red lips remained straight and stressed. Though Sofia was only six, she was well aware of Mama’s unease. Not only was Mama checking her cellphone every few seconds—which was always a bad sign—but agitation radiated out of her slender body as she walked. Sofia’s heartbeat increased with apprehension the closer they moved towards the mansion. Though Sofia had never met her bisabuela, she was not surprised to hear she had more family members on her father’s side. Mama didn’t like to talk about Sofia’s father, or her in-laws. However, an event like this had never happened before. This was the first time Sofia was to meet anyone exclusively her father’s. The knock on the large double doors echoed inwards, and a butler soon cracked one of the doors open, and led them into the marble chamber. Sofia stretched her neck to marvel at the crystal chandelier, then at the large portraits and mirrors that were hung on the walls. Finally, she noticed the rows of closed doors. “I will inform Doña Elvira de la Vega that you have arrived.” “Tell me,” Mama asked immediately, “Is Oscar here yet?” “He’s waiting in the parlor for you to join him,” The butler replied. Mama frowned, and removed her sunglasses. Sofia had never met her Tío Oscar, and she wondered if he would be able to tell her stories of her father. “Would you like some tea or coffee while you wait?” “Coffee for me, please.” Mama glided on her heels towards the parlor entrance, and Sofia realized that this was not Mama’s first visit here. She turned to Carmela, and reached for her nanny’s hand, in need of familiarity. “Sofi,” Carmela whispered, and gently removed the grip of her hand. “Go in there by yourself. I’m not allowed.” Sofia took tentative steps towards the threshold of the parlor doors, just as Carmela took her own steps back. Her mother was discussing something in hushed tones with a handsome man in the armchair next to hers. Sofia had become an expert at eavesdropping in her six years of living with Mama and her many secrets. Neither one of them noticed the small girl behind the stained glass, so she observed them through the warped effect. Even though he was sitting, Sofia could tell this man was tall, contrasting her mother’s small figure tensed forward in her chair. The man relaxed into the cushions, demonstrating a fake display of ease to mock Mama’s offensive pose. Sofia could see the open hostility between Mama’s jade eyes and the

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opaque eyes of her opposite. “—There is no way I will allow you to take away the inheritance that is rightfully Sofia’s and mine,” Mama hissed under her breath. “Sofia does not need the money. Martín left you both enough to live with, and you know it. You have become accustomed to our way of life, and now you don’t want to give up the perks. Don’t try to play games with me, Maria Elena. You won’t win this one. The old bruja raised me since I was your daughter’s age. She may have been a terrible bitch, but she was rich, and I knew she would die eventually. If she were to leave anything to anyone, it would be me.” “I don’t think I have to remind you that Martín’s only child deserves at least half of Elvira’s inheritance—” “Oh come on! Martín escaped as soon as he could, without thinking twice, which was always his way. Everyone knew the type of person he was. I never left her side. He lived for the best party, and never thought practically about his future. That’s the only reason he would marry someone like you.” He regarded Mama with distaste, challenging her with his smoothness façade, and the irritable satisfaction of finally being able to say what he thought of her after so many years. Mama’s eyes went wide. Her nostrils flared, and she clenched her teeth. “What exactly are you saying about me, Oscar?” She spoke, sharpening each word with knifes in her tone. The tension in the room stiffened the air, and Sofia knew that the man had gone too far with her mother. Sofia had never seen her so angry, and she had always shrunk in the face of her Mama’s fury. “Martín killed himself driving drunk—who knows whether it was an accident like my parents or not—but we got stuck with you. You were intelligent enough to catch him, and you were not prudent enough to let him go before he knocked you up. This is old news. We all know you married my brother for his money.” Oscar replied without any remorse. He reclined into the throne he had made from the threadbare armchair. Drinking from the whiskey in his hand, he observed Mama over the glass in victory. “I have just as much class as you, and I come from an even better family,” Mama replied. “I won’t—” “Excuse me,” the butler interrupted. Both Mama and Tío Oscar stood up with a jump. “Doña Elvira de la Vega wishes to meet her bisnieta before discussing anything further with the adults.” Everyone turned to look at Sofia. Mama observed her with a calculating gaze. Tío Oscar glared at her with incredulity. The butler stared at her expectantly, and then in the background, Sofia noticed Carmela’s steady

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coffee eyes urging her forward. However, Mama was the first to unfreeze. “Go talk to your bisabuela,” She held onto Sofia’s arm tight as she pulled her away from the parlor, and it was starting to hurt her. “She can’t stand whining, so refrain from asking her anything stupid. It is imperative for our shared future that you behave in there.” Before going into the bedroom, Sofia turned back to her mother and asked, “Mama, what are you talking about with Tío Oscar?” Mama looked down at her with an expression Sofia could not decipher. Her jade eyes were reflective and distant stones, not the clear wells of water Sofia always wished them to be. “In our world, the only way to survive is to have power. As woman, you begin the game already handicapped because you are automatically held in less esteem than a man. You have much less opportunities to govern your own life. Yet here I am. I have used all the tools at my disposal to obtain power in a society where sex, money and reputation mark you before you even leave the crib. If you are to learn anything, it is this: As a woman, you have unique skills to navigate around those that wish to control you. You will have to unseat them utilizing your own scheming to come out on top, like I have. Your Tío Oscar lost the game to me once before, so he’s still bitter about it. He can’t stand the fact that he lost to a woman. However, none of that matters as much as the test you have today.” “I don’t get it,” Sofia complained, “What do I have to do?” She felt so much pressure to act correctly today, but no one was telling her the purpose, the reason she had been dragged away from her cereal this morning. Mama exhaled with annoyance. With one hand she motioned to the mahogany doors, with the other she rubbed her temple, but nothing more was said to Sofia. Her lips were straight and stern again. Sofia entered with hesitant steps, looking back more than once at the slammed door. She was not sure why she had been asked to see this old lady, or how this meeting served as a test. There were all these intricate players performing this charade around her, and a money issue she did not entirely comprehend. Nonetheless, in the end, it was Sofia that was forced into this chamber. Draped with heavy fabric, the curtains of the bedroom created a shadowy chamber, which chocked the afternoon light, and the musky atmosphere caused Sofia to wrinkle her nose. It smelled like old person: the combination of anti-aging creams and decaying life. Across the floor, a leopard skin served as a carpet at the foot of a grandfather clock. Crystal and mirror trinkets decorated the wooden furniture, and Sofia noticed the conspicuous lack of picture frames anywhere in sight. Hadn’t this woman

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raised her father? Don’t old people normally love displaying family pictures? “Aren’t you going to kiss your bisabuela hello?” A raspy voice spoke from a rocking chair, cushioned in the corner obscured by shadows. “I would have thought that your mother had enough sense to teach you some manners.” Sofia approached Doña Elvira with caution. As she got closer she realized that her great-grandmother was not just timeworn, but rather an ancient artifact that had been wrinkled and shrunken with age. The weight of many scheming years had withered away at the life of this woman, but her milky eyes continued to gleam animated and unusually alert. “Hola bisabuela,” Sofia whispered. Though Sofia was disgusted by the parlor of the skin, she propped herself up, and kissed the creases of her great-grandmother’s cheek. “You are still so innocent, and surprised I look so old,” Doña Elvira spoke with a slight smirk. “Just as surprised as I am at your youth. You have yet to corrupt—and be corrupted—by the world. But all in due time, I suppose... Pass me my spectacles so I can see you better.” A reedy arm lifted with difficultly, and pointed towards the vanity countertop. Sofia located the spectacles, next to an ornate watch in its case, and returned them to the old woman. Doña Elvira cleaned them absently with a cloth, and after a while she placed them on the tip of her nose. Then she resumed slipping a quartz orb between her fingers. The intricate crystalline pattern caught the last few rays of light—escaped from the absorption of the curtains—and distorted them into a glittering effect that caught Sofia’s eye. “I wanted to meet the cause of all my troubles. The fighting and bickering outside my doors is your fault after all,” Doña Elvira continued playing with her ball, no semblance of sensitivity revealed in her voice. “I’m sorry,” Sofia whispered, feeling she had been blamed for a crime she neither committed, nor comprehended. She wanted to go home, and watch cartoons while Carmela combed her hair. Her feet hurt from standing so long in new shoes, and her tights were still very itchy. More than anything, Sofia wanted to eat something, because she had not been able to finish her cereal that morning when Mama had rushed her out the door. “They both want my money,” The old woman continued, unaware of Sofia’s discomfort. “They believe I have gone senile, but I have not, and I know all about the games they are playing. I have played them for almost a whole century, and I have won. Be well aware that you are merely a pawn in a larger scheme... I will die soon, yes. So I have the unpleasant duty of deciding whether to give you a bargaining advantage. Although whatever

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I decide means little, since either way you will still learn at the foot of your mother, just as I learned at the foot of mine. Soon little Sofia de la Vega will become just as they are. Ravenous dogs fighting over scraps of paper. But for now, you know nothing, and understand very little.” She sniggered in the dry manner of hers. Nevertheless, that’s when Sofia grasped that Doña Elvira de la Vega held all the power. She was the queen mother to the petty sniveling of the adults—including her Mama—outside the doors. Though she appeared harmless at first sight, she was the one manipulating the actions of others. She had them all playing her games. Indeed, Doña Elvira had called for Sofia today, so she had gotten her, no questions asked. Sofia was frightened by this woman, especially when the old lady rubbed her hands as she did, slipping a crystal orb between twisted and deformed fingers. It was as if Doña Elvira de la Vega held a glass globe in her hands, and she was the punishing God. Whether the ball broke or not mattered nothing her, she had many more to amuse herself with when she decided to let go. Sofia’s fate rested in the hands of this bruja. She wanted to go home; this entire day had confused and frightened her. “What will you do if I leave you nothing?” The webbed lips curled into a mocking smile. “Your father certainly didn’t care enough about you to assure your future. Oscar grew up under my roof. He knows my ways and my tricks. He acts not only like a dog, but also as a serpent in disguise, attacking from underneath bushes to bite the ankles of boys and girls. I don’t know whether to be proud of the monster I’ve created, but I know to always watch my ankles. If he doesn’t bite, he twists himself around you and chokes you to death.” She laughed again, proud at her choice of words, and even more amused at the expression she saw on Sofia’s face. Sofia wanted to leave this talk of dogs and snakes. She pulled loose the ribbon of one of her ponytails in agitation, and fidgeted in her place under the stare of Doña Elvira. The stuffiness of the room was making her feel like she could not breathe right. She needed to find a way out of this conversation. “I need to go to the bathroom,” Sofia finally spoke in a whisper. This was the only way she could think of to get out of the strange situation she found herself in. “I have bored you as only a rambling old lady can,” She sighed. “You can go now. I have a lot to think about, and I will die too soon anyway. Oscar and Maria Elena are probably outside this door, waiting to hear the verdict no doubt.” Sofia tiptoed backwards, until she was sure that she was no longer

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in the line of sight of her great-grandmother, and then she tripped out the bedroom door. As Doña Elvira had predicted, the adults were waiting outside to hear what had been said to Sofia. “Well,” Tío Oscar insisted, “What did the Bruja want to say to you?” “Are you serious?” Mama raised her voice in amazement, and pulled Sofia behind her. From between her Mama’s legs, Sofia could see Oscar’s eyes on her. “Sofia, don’t you dare answer or say a single word to him. We are leaving right now. Where’s Carmela?” The nanny had already appeared by the door with their things. Oscar followed them down the driveway. “Maria Elena, don’t you think you are being too hasty?” “You sure have a way with words, Oscar,” She huffed, and closed the car door on his face. Carmela made sure Sofia was strapped in, and then she sat herself in the passenger seat of the car. As their driver pulled away, Mama interrogated Sofia. “Now you can tell me what you talked about with her. I need to know everything.” Sofia had never seen her mother so focused on hearing what she had to say. Mama was not even checking her cellphone. For some reason the unprecedented attention made her even more nervous. While Sofia wanted to please her mother, the conversation with her bisabuela had been very unpleasant. Sofia did not want to think about it anymore. She pulled loose her remaining hair ribbon. “I don’t know. She talked about being really old. I’m tired. Are we going home now?” “Yes, we’re going home,” Mama sighed, and rubbed her temples with the tips of her fingers. “That cannot be all you talked about. You were in there for a long time. What else did she say?” “I can’t remember.” “Sofia, this is really important.” “She said something about dogs and snakes.” “That makes no sense, Sofia.” The little girl twisted the ribbon around one of her ankles, and ignored meeting her mother’s gaze. Sofia did not know how to express herself in a way that Mama could understand her experience in that room. Why did everyone around her want money so badly? “Can you please try to remember? For your Mama?” “I don’t know,” Sofia mumbled. “She scares me. Why does everyone call her a bruja?” Mama stared at her for a long time, then she sighed and answered with a small smirk. “It’s because of the way she’s lived for years in her decrepit mansion. She sits on millions of dollars, but won’t spend a dime on restoring

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her own home to its former glory. She thinks she’s poor, and wants to make the rest of us believe it too.” Looking out of the car window, Sofia could see the panes of plastic and rusted metal that formed the roofs of the improvised housing for the poor, slipping behind them in forgotten distortions. Slumped against these hovels, older blurs faded back into the grey of the brick, their faces unreadable in the diminishing light of the day. Mutts crawled over them and sniffed through the discarded trash littered everywhere on the roads. Children sat on the curbs, or played barefoot with a soccer ball in the street. Throughout, lines of clothes hung between them like a web that none of them would ever escape. Doña Elvira’s warped conception of poverty was nothing compared to the destitution they were currently passing in this sector right now. What a difference a pane of car glass made between her, and the children out there. Most of her life, Sofia had chosen never to look out of her window. Those in her immediate circle mattered, but the unknown children in the street were irrelevant. They had nothing to do with her and her problems. Mostly, Sofia obsessed over whether her mother might forget about her one day. Mama needed the inheritance—a fancy form of money—to maintain their lifestyle. It was all her mother ever thought about. Sofia worried she might end up like the children in the street if Doña Elvira chose to give all her money to Tío Oscar, rather than to her. Sofia had grasped that much from overhearing the conversation between Mama and Tío Oscar. Before, Sofia discarded any thoughts about those outside her societal circle, her house and her car. Those people had no money, and therefore they were poor and forgotten. Now it dawned on Sofia, that money was all that separated them from her. Sofia was not sure she had made a good impression when she had been called into Doña Elvira’s bedroom, and even worse, in the way she had left the room. “Mama,” Sofia turned back to read her mother’s expressions. “Hmm?” Mama was texting someone on her phone, her red nails flying back and forth over the keys. Her annoyance resonating with each clicking sound. “How will we know if my Bisabuela chooses to give me the money over Tío Oscar?” “We won’t know until she dies,” Mama said. After a pause—where she typed something else into her phone—she continued, “Knowing her, she won’t ever die just to spite everyone. She’s already reaching a hundred-andone, and yet she’s still conspiring, still pulling everyone’s strings.”

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“What if I visit her a lot?” Sofia voiced, proud at her own idea. The light was fading fast, the night approaching in one overwhelming sweep, but she could still see her mother’s fingers had stopped moving. Sofia felt as if she had grown a thousand years in a day. “If she sees me there all the time, she’ll choose me over him.” Her mother looked up, and turned to study Sofia with a consuming smile. “Well, look at that. You’re exactly like your Mama.” They breathed in the darkness together, until there was nothing left to see except vague outlines, and a white hair ribbon that gleamed faintly in the intermittent streetlights; fallen and forgotten.

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DRAGONFLIES Michelle Norsworthy Georgia Southern University

Dragonflies are an ugly kind of beautiful when you look at them. Bulging eyes and a tiny body. But the colors I see on them are what intrigue me. Their wings, flitting, as they land on blades of grass and weeds thinner than paper, are iridescent in the August heat—translucent rainbows over ponds and ground. How does that big ass insect not snap a blade of grass in two? *** Since forever, it’s been my mom and I, battling one thing or another. There’s Mema, known by the government as Susie, and she’s like Mama but different. Older. Blunt. She says everything happens because Jesus and that’s it. Sunday afternoons were Bible lessons and singing “Jesus Loves Me,” and weekdays after school were Oprah and after that, Mema’s “stories” came on— we were waiting for Papa to get home from his County job. I didn’t understand Days of Our Lives. It was always just adults saying stuff I didn’t understand and living a life of dramatic pauses and generic faces. Except a woman who got kidnapped by a man. Of all the places to take her, he chose a fancy-ass house with shrubs of azaleas and butterfly bushes. Where’s the cartoons at? *** I asked Mema if I was grey. At five years old, I knew my colors pretty well. Smashing and snapping crayons in my furious coloring, leaving them to melt in the trunk of Mama’s car. I said, “Mema.” Turning around in the passenger seat she said, “What?” I imagine I stared at her for a long moment, tried to gather my thoughts. “If black and white make grey, and Mama’s white and Daddy’s black then... don’t that make me grey?”

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She couldn’t help it. She cawed, slapping her knee, locks of shiny brown hair flopping out of the messy bun she’d fashioned. Her light brown eyes watered, spilling lakes of laughter down, squeezing through the space between her cheeks, visions of her Native heritage, and her glasses. “Oh!” she exhaled, reaching for Papa as if he was going to help her breathe. I imagine he laughed too, sky blue eyes crinkling in the rearview mirror. A throaty laugh that ended with, “Ahh,” and a, “What’cha say, Fatbelly?” *** When I was in third grade, it wasn’t just me and Mama anymore. My cousins, three of them, had come to live with us. Their dad, Uncle Dan, was a welder who traveled too much to watch after them but it was his turn with the kids anyway. They came from Tennessee - Bristol actually, and there were two boys and one girl. Brittany, the oldest, was a sixth grader who I felt like must know about life. The things Mema’s soaps were about. Strawberry blonde hair, dark roots, and freckled cheeks that were always mottled red. She was experienced, having had several boyfriends about whom she’d tell me stories. I pretended to understand everything she was saying, because no one else could tell me grown up things. Daniel, the next oldest, was a fifth grader who had once made the bus driver—a petite black woman with a short haircut, freckles, and the attitude of a mom—stop the bus in the middle of a ditch when he declared, in a sea of black and brown faces, “White people are better than black people, because black people are dumb.” I shrank then, plastered against the hot metal side of the bus thinking Oh, God, why me. The whole bus fell quiet and every face—brown, black, ivory, and olive—turned to the back of the bus (the place where “cool” kids sat) with their wide-eyes and O-shaped mouths. That’s how I found out about race. The bus driver let in, taught him a moral lesson or two, and proceeded to carry the rest of the children home. Getting off the bus was embarrassing; there was me, a chubby mixed kid clad in pastel pink and snaggle-toothed, wanting to apologize for my cousin. Instead, I zipped off the bus, fat plaits pushed back by the wind. Benjamin, seven months younger than me, was laughing at Daniel like everyone else. Like the high schoolers who whispered funny things I didn’t understand. Mama made him apologize, but he didn’t sit with us cool kids anymore.

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*** The yard behind Mema and Papa’s house was huge, and extended into an even larger animal pen and forest. We sat around the pond as a family, watching gold- and koi fish dance around in the water. We talked, our youngest uncle (Dune) napped in a hammock between two Pines. We listened to cicadas and the occasional owl. Lightning bugs popped into and out of existence at dusk, and the occasional damsel- or dragonfly would whizz by our heads to glide across the water—snatching up annoying mosquitos and devouring them whole. When my cousins came to live with us, there wasn’t any quiet. Someone was fussing. Someone was tired. Someone was saying, “Bye,” so they could go play video games. My dad came to visit once. *** There were five of us—six when Uncle Dan was home—in a two bedroom single wide trailer. The kids slept in the living room because the bedroom, my bedroom, was haunted. Our imaginations painted darker-than-dark silhouettes of half-bodied people, and Hide ‘n’ Go-Seek-in-the-Dark made it worse. Mama got the “master bedroom” and Daddy was sleeping in there with her, his white and green Jackson cop car parked in the back, like God telling us that things were kind of crazy. That they would only get worse. Uncle Dan came home, his huge dirty grey van screeching to a halt at our chicken-wire gate. I bet if I’d focused, I could have smelled the acrid stench of liquor on him before he stumbled up the bootleg steps. He knew Daddy was a cop and, when he walked in the front door, I knew he’d seen Daddy’s car because he bypassed me and his kids entirely. Black dirty boots thudding, thunk thunk, on carpet floors. Iron and beer, smoke and alcohol, came off him in near tangible waves. “Where you at, motherfucker?” he shouted. The parts of his face not hidden by his thick, dark beard were beet red. He pounded on Mama’s door. “Hey! Let me talk to you for a second, brother!” Brother, like he was being a friend to my Daddy. Like he was a brother, asking for a nice chat. Boom boom! went his fist. “Stop!” I screamed, a pathetic sight in Mama’s holey Ducks Unlimited teeshirt down to my calves, “Stop it!” I jumped in front of him, small body trying to knock his 260-ish frame sideways. Away from Mama and Daddy.

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Uncle Dan was gonna scare him away. Daddy wouldn’t ever come back. “I know you in there, motherfucker!” The door smacked open—it wasn’t thick enough, sturdy enough, to withstand his angry fists. Daddy was waking up, putting back on his uniform pants, and Mama’s face was a blur. I remember Daddy saying, calmly, “I think I should go,” and Mama nodding her head. “You ain’t goin’ nowhere, nigger,” Uncle Dan shouted. “Let me get my gun.” He went to the washer and dryer—hidden by a sheet—reached above to shelf and pulled down the rifle case. “Stop! Stop it!” A nine year old wasn’t going to stop a grown ass man. By the time Uncle Dan had gotten his gun out, the back door was wide open and the taillights of Daddy’s cop car were lighting up the side of the trailer. He was leaving and he wasn’t gonna come back. I knew it, and I knew it was all Dan’s fault. I could’ve killed him if I was big enough. When he aimed the gun at the back of the cruiser, I could’ve thrown him down the stairs. Could’ve punched his bloated stomach ‘til he collapsed. “Why!” I screeched. By now his kids had woken up, watching, horrified. Mama was trying to get me to calm down, wrapping her pale arms around me, both as a comfort and a restraint. I snatched away from her—she wasn’t really trying anyway—and slammed my tiny fists against Uncle Dan’s stomach. “Why did you do that?” My brown skin knocking the red from his skin. He paled as I assaulted him and I didn’t want to stop. Uncle Dan plopped into a rickety chair, weeping, the gun propped against the table. “I’m sorry,” he sobbed, “I’m so sorry.” Fuck him. He pulled me into a hug, his breath making me nauseous. Fuck him. “I didn’t mean to hurt you.” Funny thing is, I wasn’t even sure he was talking to me. Or about what he’d just done. I didn’t care though, I struggled to get out of his grasp but Mama was crying too and telling me to calm down. She’d seen how bad I’d wanted to knock his lights out after I had turned from Daddy driving away, after I’d screamed for him to come back, yelling “Daddy! No! Come back! Please! He didn’t mean it! Daddy!” *** They say dragonflies are signs of metamorphosis, the wisdom that comes from hardship and change.

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THE LITTLE PRINCE Alice Pow Bradley University

“You are my world,” he said, landing atop a small planet. “You will be my everything.” I have seen what people do to worlds, the small planet thought, but it said nothing.

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ODE TO YOU Alice Pow Bradley University

To the sun: cordial, calm, and alight, to the colors it casts across the sky just before clear, starry nights. To the amethyst and autumn glow, to the flickering flame and polished stone, to the vapor-fabricated kingdoms drifting glorious and tall. To the gray that looks like an artistâ€™s mistake, to the white that floats and bounces in different shapes, to the child that gazes up above. To the trees that forever reach, to the birds soon to wake in their silhouetted sheets, to the water where the sun glitters and sinks. To the gold that transcends our world, a hurricane of yelloworange, to the scarlet, mistaken, nearly forgotten. To the tulip-faded pink stained by crimson streaks, to the rust-colored heat, to the window shade opened, to the sailorâ€™s red horizon.

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GOOD WOMEN Danielle Marie Clark Grand Valley State University

We are all good women in my house we take our pills from their blister packs and do not tell our parents the secret of how we found meaning edging our hips on the dryer as someone has us, holds us By God we will be good women held together by spandex innocence we will teach ourselves to stretch so thin to drive stick, to fry chicken to remove a splinter with tweezers to wash out a wound we will learn how to deface our name with our husbands and we will learn to remove the crusts from our bread we are still good women we do things our own way trust our own time listen for love advice from Venus in retrograde and let the ocean lap at us by instruction from the moon we are all women who have cried at the absence of blood or the loss of it who have fought in our own bodies until nobody wins who touch ourselves not to fall asleep but to feel pleasure and bursting to know a delay in gratification

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to know and to know and to know we were all born women as she, her we are emotion and not emotion definable only by the mystery of the undefined we will to teach you how to operate a knife, to slice and how to make salve for mending, for healing we will commune as women and lovers of each other we will touch our tongues to the roofs of our mouth and close buttons over buttons to memorize each others names and the feel of them

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TO THE RED SKY Emilee Kinney Albion College

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ALL WAS SWEPT AWAY Emilee Kinney Albion College

All was swept away from the worn down alley of faded bricks and â€œNot Structurally Sound.â€? They tore down the temple of thin strings that crissed and crossed connecting strangers through the tapestry of territorial flags: damp shirts and socks that no longer swing in the city breeze. They used to billow from windows and race to the top, cigarette smoke and cooking steam now absent from the alley. All was swept away, save a stray leaf, tarnished red-brown speckled and crinkled with dirt and decay and a rusted, red bird cage, barren as the street of all that used to sing.

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DER ERLKÖNIG Ryan Deysher Emerson College

Two weeks after I started taking medication for being perpetually disgruntled (more specifically, antidepressants), I started playing piano again. The first night I sat down at the piano, the keys were dusty; the wooden top littered with old sheet music. I turned the lamp on, closed the blinds, stubbed my toe on the bench (some things never change), and sifted through the music. I picked out Schubert’s Moment Musical No. 3 and started playing. Prior to this sudden spur of motivation I had been sitting in my bedroom watching Seinfeld and eating a whole lemon. For me, this is a nice little ritual that I try to complete as often as possible. It soothes me. Anyway, after I finished the lemon and got bored of Seinfeld I was left twiddling my thumbs wondering what to do. For whatever reason, I had the Chopin’s Nocturne in C Minor stuck in my head. I first heard the nocturne during a performance of exclusively Chopin pieces at the local University. Each year, instructors from all over the peninsula would gather their best students and hold a concert dedicated to one specific composer. I would typically perform in these without much thought. However, the Chopin performance stood out. I don’t remember what I played. What I do remember is the girl who went after me. She wore a puffy red dress with sparkly yellow shoes. Her dress looked like an upside down rose, which I guess would be appealing to some people. It wasn’t appealing to me because I don’t like roses. They’re too pompous! The way she strode up to the bench was oh so stately and self-important (much like a rose). She looked so ridiculous that I struggled not to burst out into fits of terrible laughter. That struggle dissipated the moment she began playing. Rarely had a piece struck me as much as the Chopin nocturne the girl in the goofy flower dress played. I looked up the song on my computer. I listened to several interpretations. Some were good, some were average. None were

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particularly outstanding until I came across a performance by Alice Sara Ott, a modern German pianist. Her performance was beautiful and wholly unique. It gave the piece an entirely new level of personality and intimacy. The difference is hard to explain, but it’s there. My favorite part of the piano is the ability to put a part of yourself into the piece. For me, there isn’t a more organic form of expression than playing the piano. That first night I played the piano for three hours. I finally stopped when my ten year old sister yelled at me to “shut up” from the living room where she was watching one of her hundreds of DVDs about horses. I’ll never understand the obsession with horses. For weeks I would play the piano for hours a day. Before I knew it, I had a follow up appointment about whether or not my medication was actually working. Was it? I didn’t really feel much happier. The biggest differences were that I was playing piano again, I was a bit more pleasant in public, and I was in a back brace (I slept in a wooden chair on Fourth of July and ended up pulling something in my back). The doctor asked me, “Do you feel like there’s been any difference?” I didn’t know so I said I didn’t know. How do I actually feel? How should I know? “Let me put it this way,” she said. “How do you feel now in comparison to how you felt this time last year?” I mean, considering that this time last year I would pretty much sleep all day in order to waste time so I’d be dead quicker, I’d say I’m doing pretty damn good. “It’s better. So I guess it’s doing something. And I’m more motivated so that’s good.” “Do you feel like it could be working better?” I paused briefly. I figured that I hadn’t had many side affects. I hadn’t gained any weight (far and away my biggest concern). “Yeah, sur--” She cut me off. “Alright I’ll put you on three-hundred milligrams. We’ll set up another appointment for next month.” Wonderful. All I could think about was going home as I walked towards my rickety old Pontiac in the lot. My hoard of lemons were calling out to me and I knew exactly which episode of Seinfeld I wanted to watch (the one where Kramer puts a hot tub in his apartment) . This guy walking near me was walking with similar urgency. Maybe he also wanted to get home as quick as possible so he could watch his favorite Seinfeld episodes and eat some sort of citrus fruit? Suddenly the sound of a monster snarling and retching erupted from my pocket. It was my cellphone. My ringtone

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was monster noises. I thought it was funny. The guy gave me a weird look and continued on. I answered. “Pat-diggity-dawg!” “Ryguydeyshdawg!” I love fun nicknames. “Whaddaya want buddy joe?” “Band of Brothers tonight?” We had been watching Band of Brothers for the past few weeks. “Yeah, sure. I’ll be home in twenty. See ya in a bit, Patso.” Pat wasn’t there yet when I got home. I decided to sit down at the piano while I waited. I turned the lamp on, closed the blinds, and stubbed my toe on the bench. This time I played a piano transcription of Wagner’s Siegfried Idyll. Wagner originally wrote the piece as a private gift to his wife. It’s a song meant to evoke tranquility and I find playing the small portion that I know proficiently to be very calming. Pat arrived. “I heard the piano outside the door, man. Sounds great. I didn’t know you were back into that...hey I brought Sun Chips!” He shook the bag around. He knows me too well. “You ready for some Brothers? This one’s a doozy.” In the episode that Pat and I watched that night, there is a scene depicting a quartet performing Beethoven’s String Quartet No. 14 in C Minor. Their town had been almost completely destroyed and amongst the rubble they performed Beethoven’s piece. While maybe not the most realistic scene, it was indeed a “doozy.” Beethoven is likely my favorite composer of all time. I was taught in the tradition of Beethoven. According to my former instructor, Beethoven himself is in the line of teachers that taught me. “Your teacher’s teacher’s teacher’s teacher was Beethoven,” she would always tell me in a voice so dry and monotone that it gave mine a run for its money. I’m not so sure how reliable her claim is, but I’ll believe it if not only for how much I enjoy Beethoven’s work. Despite how much I love Beethoven, there were points in time that I hated him. I remember specifically the time that I was learning his famous Moonlight Sonata. I perfected the first movement and played it frequently at performances. The second movement bored me a bit and was more difficult, but I still learned it. The movement that gave me trouble was the third movement. The trouble was made all the more upsetting by how much I love the third movement. The third movement of his Moonlight Sonata is a perfect piece of music. The speed and intensity of the beginning arpeggios are incredible. About a minute into the piece,

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the arpeggios let up and possibly my favorite moment in any bit of music ever happens. The thought that one person could write and perform something like this amazes me. But still, I couldn’t learn it. Mastering the arpeggios took time and I wasn’t patient enough. I gave up. That year I went to my annual piano guild exam. The only thing written on my report card was “Flawless.” Regardless, I felt like a failure. I couldn’t even learn my favorite piece. For years, I refused to even listen to the 3rd movement of the sonata. I stopped playing the other two movements. This was the beginning of my ambivalence towards piano. I gradually played less and less piano until I completely lost interest. I quit lessons despite my teacher’s objection. I stopped turning the lamp on, closing the blinds, and stubbing my toe on the bench (I was fine with this). When the episode of Band of Brothers ended, Pat hopped into his Corolla and headed towards home. I went up to my room and listened to some of Schubert’s collected lieder on my computer. I particularly liked the vocal work of the German baritone Dietrich Fischer-Dieskau on Schubert’s lieder. My favorite of the bunch was Der Erlkönig, based on the Goethe poem of the same name. I was hoping to find a transcription of the song for solo piano. There was one transcription by Liszt, but no way was I gonna be able to do that one at my level. Liszt is known for having a fast and complicated (sometimes overly so) style. Playing him well is quite the accomplishment. Liszt himself would criticize his students for not playing his songs exactly how he intended them to played. This criticism would manifest in abstract ways. He would comment with “do not chop beefsteak” or “there you go, mixing salad again,” when he wasn’t pleased with a students playing. When it came to Liszt, I’d definitely chop beefsteak. Other transcriptions popped up, but none were that great upon listening. I finally decided to try out the Liszt. The next morning, I sat down and slowly played the first few measures of the piece. It was going fine. Throughout the day, I would periodically play the song in between doing other things. I played it while I cooked an egg. I paused the episode of Curb Your Enthusiasm that I was watching, and played it for a few minutes. I listened to it in my car when I had to go places. When I took my sister to horseback riding (I don’t get it), I listened to the piece. When I went to my friends beach house to drink Mike’s Hard Lemonade and play mini-golf, I listened to it on the drive over. I even listened to it while I halfheartedly

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vacuumed the floor at the tire store I worked at. My consistency with the piece was all over the place. Sometimes I would play measures almost perfectly. Other times they would be horrible. I wasn’t making any progress, I was just getting lucky occasionally. I was frustrated with Erlkönig, but I still practiced it with the other pieces I was working on. The more I played it, the more pointless it felt, but I did it anyway. That’s just what you’re supposed to do. Towards the end of the month, it was getting to be the time that I would have to go to the doctor again to discuss my “progress” with antidepressants. I wasn’t looking forward to it. I hate doctors. They’re by no means as bad as dentists, but still they harrow me. Not to mention that the secretary is uncomfortably unpleasant. Not that I blame her. I’d probably be the same way. Hell, that’s how I am when they get desperate enough at the tire store to put me on desk. On the day of the appointment, I brought my sister with me because my parents were busy. I felt bad for her. The only thing worse than having to go to the doctor is going to the doctor with somebody and sitting in the dreary waiting room. She brought her little tablet along so she could watch a horse movie or something in the waiting room while I was uncomfortably telling some physician’s assistant “how I feel.” The meeting went pretty much exactly the way it went the month before. The doctor asked if I was feeling better and I said something along the lines of “I guess so.” The only difference this time is that they couldn’t bump me up on the dosage any higher, which was great because that meant I didn’t have to stop at the pharmacy on the way home. My sister and I went home. I had to take her to her horseback lesson in a bit, so I decided to read a book about breeds of horses with her. I wanted to see what all the hubbub was about. She picked her favorite breed, I picked my favorite breed. She liked the Clydesdale and I liked the Shetland pony because it looked silly and had roughly the same haircut as a fourteen year old me. I took her to horseback and asked her more about horses. I can’t say that I entirely understand the horse obsession, but I definitely get the appeal. When I got back home, I decided to play Erlkönig again. The first try I played the opening chords well enough. Second try was bad. I did this for about half an hour, alternating between passable and terrible. I stopped mid-playing and started randomly banging notes on the piano like all of my sister’s friends do when they come over. I always tell them “the piano isn’t a toy guys. I’m cool if you play it, just be gentle.” Here I am banging

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the piano like a petulant five-year-old. I groan and say “goddammit” or some other expletive. I look down at my phone. It reads “18:30” (I’m one of those people). It’s time to pick my sister up. I open the blinds, turn the light off, and close the fall board over the keys. I think about what I should make my sister for dinner. I wanna make salmon because I like it and it’s good for her, but she won’t be into that. Maybe spaghetti? I don’t really like spaghetti. Too many carbs. Who knows? We’ll figure it out. She could watch Seinfeld with me afterwards. We did that once and she said “I don’t get it.” Heck, maybe I’ll cave and watch some movie about horses! I look at my phone again. It reads 18:45 (that’s 6:45 for the layman). I don’t wanna be late for her. I go into the kitchen and take my medication. Looking at it makes me ask myself; how do I actually feel? How should I know?

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AS THE CROW FLIES Melanie Gillman

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INTERVIEW WITH MELANIE GILLMAN By Paige Rowland Oakland University

For those that haven’t heard about As the Crow Flies, what is it about? As the Crow Flies is a webcomic about a group of queer and trans teenagers who meet on a Christian youth backpacking trip in the Rocky Mountains. The main themes of the story are about the intersections of queer identity and religious faith in Christian kids; especially how they navigate gender and sexuality in religious spaces that aren’t always very supportive of queer and trans people. It’s about 260 pages long as of this writing, and is drawn entirely in colored pencil! You have stated in previous interviews that As the Crow Flies draws upon your own experience in Christian youth camp. What caused you to choose to tell this particular story? Was there something about your experience in camp that just stuck around with you, something that compelled you to tell a story about “camping-while-queer”? A lot of it just came down to, I wasn’t seeing many good, honest stories being written about queer and trans youth in religious spaces! I think it’s really important for queer and trans kids to have stories that reflect their own lives—because far too many kids still grow up in communities where LGBTQ people are either never talked about, or openly scorned. That’s definitely how I was raised! So, in a way, I’m trying to make the book I needed as a kid but didn’t have—something that was undeniably queer, undeniably trans, and full of relatable characters, but that also wouldn’t romanticize or sugarcoat the real stresses and dangers Christian spaces can pose for queer and trans kids. You have also stated before that you limited your color palette for As the Crow Flies to only five colors. Why did you limit yourself to only five colors? Was it to challenge yourself? And why did you choose these five colors?

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I like the challenge of working with creative limitations! I almost always have a limited palette for my colored pencil work—I rarely use more than 6 pencil colors per drawing. In As the Crow Flies, the five colors I’m using are cream, naples yellow, terracotta, magenta, and chrome oxide green. For a giant book like As the Crow Flies, the limited palette means every page feels part of the same “world” as the rest of the book. It also means I have to push myself and experiment a lot with color mixing! For instance, the fact that I’m not using a black pencil means I have to create blacks on the page by mixing several layers of terracotta, magenta, and chrome oxide green. What was the motivation behind becoming a comic artist? Were there any key influences or reasons that drove you towards the comics medium? Comics just feels like the right medium for me on some intuitive level I can’t quite explain! I love the intersections of image and text in comics— there’s so much possibility for interplay between the two, and you can say so much through even just the design each page, the way you arrange and group the panels, everything! And especially for a YA story about LGBTQ kids and kids of color, I love working in a visual medium. There’s so many YA books out there where characters of color especially get whitewashed by bad cover design, or small-minded readers who can’t accept that these protagonists they love and identify with might not all be white. It’s much harder to do that with comics! What do you think the medium of comic books has that other mediums of storytelling inherently lack? What do you believe are the advantages of telling stories through comics? Apart from the things I mentioned above, comics right now has a thriving culture of self-publishing that I haven’t yet seen replicated in any other creative industry. Most people are raised to believe mainstream publishing is the only “legitimate” form of publishing, so they often react weirdly when I list self-publishing as a major strength of comics—but it really is! Things like webcomics, minicomics, and small-press anthologies are a big part of how so many marginalized artists—women, LGBTQ people, people of color, people with disabilities, etc.—have been able to make inroads into comics. Mainstream publishing is still by and large stacked against people who aren’t straight, cis, able-bodied, and white—but the pro-self-publishing and small-press culture has opened up a crucial alternate route for creators to still tell their stories and build audiences.

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You have such a knack for making characters that are unique in both personality and design. The best part about it is how real they all feel. Did you base any of the characters on people you know, or do you people watch and write down conversations (which I have heard a good number of writers do)? I do often base characters off people I know (and myself ), but usually it’s a matter of adapting specific aspects of real-life people’s personalities that seem to fit. I might give a character the sense of humor of one person, but combined with the anxieties of another, and the social awkwardness of a third. Though, I never lift characters whole-cloth from real-life people— even myself!—because half the fun of fiction is imagining new people. I do try my best to make all my characters three dimensional, and a lot of that just comes down to spending time with lots of different people, and really listening to them. So, I’m probably guilty of eavesdropping on other people’s conversations—though I don’t ever record them (that feels a little creepy!) What genres and themes are you usually drawn towards? Queer literature first and foremost! I especially love finding queer characters and queer themes in unexpected places—science fiction, fantasy, westerns, the like. Spec fic, and genre fiction in general, has a lot of potential for exploring queerness that’s criminally unappreciated, in my opinion. I want to read more books where queer people aren’t just doing the standard Gay Fiction Genre Tropes—tragically falling in love with straight protagonists, tragically coming out and getting immediately outcast by their family and friends, tragically dying at a young age, tragically having their death used to spark some sort of character development for straight protagonists, so on and so on. I’d much rather read about queers running geologic surveys on Neptune or robbing stage coaches in 1800s Arizona or opening the first all-trans Shakespearean theater troupe. Did you read a lot when you were younger? What kind of things did you read, and how heavily did they influence the work you do now? I read a TON as a kid—I was absolutely one of those classic cases of a kid who uses books as escapism. I particularly loved fantasy, scary stories, historical fiction, and romance as a kid—still do, as it happens! I can’t say for sure how that has affected my current work, but I definitely believe that reading a lot is crucial for writers. The best way to build a good sense of narrative building and character development is to study how other people

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have done it, then practice and play around with those methods as much as possible. The way you draw As the Crow Flies feels as if it’s a piece of cinema, or a storyboard for a movie or show. For example, the first few opening pages shows a crow’s feather as it flies through the air, and all of the hiking and mountain scenes where there are no characters or dialogue. Did you draw scenes like this in order to help keep a quiet and slow pace in the story? The slow pace of the story is definitely deliberate! Charlie has a rich inner life, and because of her somewhat introverted, closed-off personality, a lot of things are going on with her throughout the story which she never says aloud. So, I wanted to give her plenty of breathing room for thinking and processing what’s happening around her. Even in groups, backpacking can often feel like a solitary activity—you have a lot of time to yourself on the trail, just absorbing your surroundings. And for a book set in the Rocky Mountains—one of the most beautiful environments on the planet—it felt like I’d be doing readers a disservice if I didn’t try to showcase the landscape, and make it a complex character in the book in its own right. I find that stories that deal with heavy issues, like homophobia and transphobia and racism, tend to make really one dimensional “villains”. I understand that a lot of the time this happens due to frustration over being oppressed and erased, or the fact that some of these authors never experienced these things themselves. What advice do you have to give to authors that want to write about heavy topics realistically, and making realistic and complex characters? In a weird way, I’ve found that books dealing with homophobia and transphobia written by straight, cis people often have the more onedimensional villains! I think it’s partly because straight, cis people often write about LGBTQ oppression as a way to subconsciously absolve themselves of guilt—the oppression of marginalized people is much easier to process if you tell yourself it’s the fault of individual cruel people, rather than a systemic problem. (And the worse you make your homophobic/ transphobic villains, the more you can pat yourself on the back for not being anywhere as bad as those guys!) The way to write a good antagonist is actually the same way you write a good protagonist—really spend time in their heads, questioning why they feel and act the way they do, and allow them to have conflicting emotions and reactions when appropriate.

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And if you’re convinced you need to have one “villain” character who’s a stand-in for homophobia or transphobia, remember that marginalization is a structural issue, not an individual one—your villain is most likely just one small arm of that societal structure. How has working on As the Crow Flies helped you to grow as a comic artist? In theory, working on any comic should help you grow as a comic artist! How good your comics are is really a function of how much you’ve practiced and pushed yourself. And As the Crow Flies has absolutely pushed me, both as an artist and a writer. It’s the longest and most complex story I’ve ever tackled by far, and with some of the most demanding drawings I’ve ever done—imagine drawing an entire mountain’s worth of pine trees for a single panel, then multiplying that over a several-hundred-pages-long book, and you’ll see what I mean! But I like that all that hard work is evident on the page—looking back over the comic as a whole, you can really see the areas where I’ve improved over time. On one level that’s frustrating— the book will never have a consistent, polished style—but I’m very much so looking forward to applying the skill sets I learned in As the Crow Flies to future books!

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CONTRIBUTORS Estefania Acquaviva is a junior at Villanova University pursuing a bachelor’s degree in English and Spanish Literature, with minors in Creative Writing and Business. She grew up in her family’s printing press, El Comercio, in Quito, Ecuador. From a very young age, fascinated by the traveling stories through the building, she would follow her father from room to room as he explained how a newspaper company worked. From there, she wrote whenever she could, on scraps of paper, sticky-notes, book margins, and even on the back of her arms if she had to. These words were a blend of English and Spanish lingo that little by little transformed into more coherent stories. The passion she developed for the written word was born at El Comercio, but now she now pursues it in writing. Ameya Calvocoressi is a senior at Skidmore College attempting to renew her love affair with poetry. She is currently a resident of New Haven, Connecticut hoping to pursue a career in psychology. She is thrilled to have been accepted for her first publication by the Oakland Arts Review and to have joined the ranks of many a talented writer. She thanks any potential readers for their time and attention. Sarah Cash was born and raised in Denver, Colorado. She is a new graduate from the University of Colorado Denver with a Bachelor of Arts in Philosophy and a Creative Writing Minor. In her work, she strives to integrate her passion for both literature and philosophy with the hope of enlivening her characters and the worlds they walk through. When she is in need of inspiration, a fresh playlist and a worn sketchbook are always close at hand. Sena Cebeci is a sophomore at Princeton University studying politics. On campus she is also a member of spoken word poetry group Songline Slam Poetry and leads the Board of Princeton’s Muslim Students’ Association. She can be contacted through email at scebeci@princeton.edu. Ameena Chaudhry is a 21-year-old Pakistani-American writer studying English and Gender/Women’s/Sexuality Studies at the University of Iowa.

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She enjoys breakfast foods, tattoos, and coffee in any form. Her all-time favorite book is A Thousand Splendid Suns by Khaled Hosseini. Ameena is currently working on her first novel. Danielle Marie Clark is a poet, reader and student in Grand Rapids, Michigan. Her work can be found in Fishladder, Ignited Magazine, Running Out of Ink and Nostrovia Press’s Fuck Art, Let’s Dance! Danielle is the founder of the reading and workshop series, Writers Under Thirty, and a partner with the Great Lakes Commonwealth of Letters. A lover of West Michigan, she will graduate from Grand Valley State University’s writing program in the spring of 2017. Ryan Deysher is a current Writing, Literature, and Publishing major at Emerson College in Boston, with a focus in creative non-fiction. He is originally from Salisbury, Maryland. Ryan has been playing classical piano for 17 years and it has been a frequent topic in his writing. With his writing, Ryan is attempting to figure himself out in an entertaining manner, and he hopes that somebody gets something out of that. Dalia Elhassan is a Sudanese-American poet currently enrolled at The New School’s Eugene Lang College for Liberal Arts. Her work has placed in several competitions in the past and appears in a number of publications, including The Kenyon Review and the Sierra Nevada Review. She currently resides in NYC. Macy French is a junior at Tusculum College in Greeneville, Tennessee. Her work has been published in These Fragile Lilacs Poetry Journal, Abbreviate, Frontier Magazine, and The Sucarnochee Review. She is the fiction editorial assistant at The Tusculum Review. Melanie Gillman is a non-binary comic artist and cartoonist. They are most known for their webcomic As the Crow Flies, and have done various other freelance work. Poetry editor and comics lover Paige Rowland was given the chance to interview Melanie about their work, specifically about As the Crow Flies, and queer comics in general. Rachel Ann Girty is a recent graduate of Northwestern University, where she studied creative writing and vocal performance and worked as poetry editor of Helicon magazine. Her work has recently appeared in The Briar

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Cliff Review, The Fem, Imagine This! An Artprize Anthology, and Body Parts Magazine and will soon appear in Glass: A Journal of Poetry and on the Academy of American poets website. She is a recent recipient of the Jean Meyer Aloe Prize from the Academy of American Poets and the Iris N. Spencer Poetry Award. She was born and raised in Metro Detroit. Ezgi Nur Güvem is a senior student at Dogus University in Istanbul, Turkey. She studies English Language and Literature, with an emphasis of 19thcentury poetry. She has been looking to have her first poems accepted for publication and she finally achieved that goal with the Oakland Arts Review. Brandon Hansen is a senior English-Writing and Environmental Studies student at Northern Michigan University in Marquette, Michigan. He scratches for truth in everything, but finds it exhausting and weird a lot of the time. He is also a Writing Center tutor at Northern Michigan University and is applying for MFA programs. Julieanna Herriven is a native of New Bern, North Carolina and attends Catawba College as a junior Environmental Education major. This is her first published essay. Emily Hillebrand is a junior majoring in Writing, Literature and Publishing at Emerson College. She has been published in two of the college’s literary magazines, Gauge and Black Swan, as well as in Golden Walkman Magazine, and is a poetry editor for the online literary magazine Persephone’s Daughters. Her favorite poet is Sharon Olds. Haley Ingram is a recent graduate who studied both Ecology & Conservation and Creative Writing at Bowling Green State University. She loves fish, and hopes to work with fisheries and freshwater ecosystem restoration in the future. Haley would like to thank her mom, for showing her magic when she was younger, and Christine, for letting her write the majority of “Alewife” in her cabin on Lake Michigan. Zane Johnson is a student of creative writing at the University of Colorado Denver. He is an assistant poetry editor at the university’s literary journal, Copper Nickel. His work has appeared or is forthcoming in Birdy., Ourglass, Patient Press, and VINILLA. Between classes, he works at the Denver Art

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Museum as a gallery host. Emilee Kinney is an active student-athlete, enjoying her second year at Albion College. She is pursuing her dream of a long and wonderful career in the art of creative writing and is proud to have had the opportunity to become published by the Oakland Arts Review. Benjamin Kuzava is an undergraduate student at Central Michigan University, and will soon be out in the real world, teaching English in some distant high school classroom. That, or he’ll be unemployed. He’s really vying against the latter. Aaron Leininger is a poet whose work has appeared in Gravel and Buck Off magazine. He is currently an undergraduate at California State University, Chico and lives in Redding, California. Michael McGillicuddy is a poet born on July 8th, 1993. He is a senior at Emerson College in Boston, Massachusetts. He is studying creative writing and philosophy. This is his first publication. Mikayla Meyers is a sophomore Creative Writing and English Literature major with a Publishing and Editing minor at Susquehanna University. She is originally from Frederick, Maryland. One of her aspirations as a writer is to bring the epic poem style back into popular culture with a modern twist. Mikayla hopes to study literature in Ireland for a semester. Abigail Newhouse is an undergrad at Utah State University. She has been published or has work forthcoming in Chantwood, Rainy Day, and Crab Fat magazines. She spent all of Thanksgiving break watching the movie Fargo, as well as both seasons of the TV show Fargo. She does not regret this. Michelle Norsworthy is a Georgia native who spends most of her spare time writing fiction, poetry, and non-fiction. When not doing that, she’s trying her hand at other creative endeavors with equal parts hope and frustration. She is currently pursuing a B.A. in Writing and Linguistics at Georgia Southern, and hopes to complete her first collection of short stories soon.

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Alice Pow studies Creative Writing and Journalism at Bradley University. Her other published works can be found in Bradley University’s Broadside journal, and on her blog, 50wordsaday.tumblr.com, where she usually keeps up with writing a daily short story. Her skills include sharing too much personal information with strangers, drawing from her experience as a transgender woman, and being able to say the alphabet backwards really fast. She would answer the trolley problem by fighting the trolley. Sebastian Romero is a Mexican writer and current sophomore, double majoring in English and Creative writing, and Ethics and Public Policy at the University of Iowa. He started his studies back home at the University of Monterrey. He has also attended the Iowa Young Writers’ Workshop, and the Yale Writer’s Conference. His work has appeared in magazines, journals and anthologies such as Origins, The Acentos Review, The Bookend Review, and The Battering Ram. Mahalia Sobhani is a fourth-year creative writing student at Northwestern University. Her concentration is creative nonfiction, and she has a background in poetry as well. Gabrielle Tribou lives in Tallahassee, Florida, where she attends Florida State University. She is an English and Interdisciplinary Humanities double major. CJ West is a queer, non-binary writer whose daily goal is to feel like less of a lie. So far, CJ’s work appears in Vagabond City and Corridor’s Magazine. They serve as the photographer and assistant print manager for Emerson Poetry Project. Studying performance poetry through a self-created program at Emerson College, they’re a sad grateful bean who loves cats, bread, and women. They’re allergic to two, and one is out to get them. Lydia Yousief is a senior at Vanderbilt University, majoring in Middle Eastern Studies. A practicing Copt and a child of Egyptian immigrant parents, she learned to write in English what others told or sang to her in Arabic. She is interested in translating the foreign, engaging with the floating stories of an oral tradition, empowering people through their stories in a Western context. These are their stories.

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Zaynab Zaman is a junior studying history at Princeton University, with a minor in South Asian Studies. Though sheâ€™s not pursuing creative writing academically, she writes for a number of campus publications, mainly poetry, reflections, and even the occasional news article. Poetry is her favorite form of creative expression, because she feels that one is able to convey ideas that are otherwise impossible to put into words. Creative writing is something she has found solace in, both through what she reads and what sheâ€™s written, and is something she hopes to continue in the future.

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